Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 19:08:22 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 102652 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i'm not fake [time] => 2005-08-04 14:09:20 [hometext] => if anybody ever called me fake or deppresed or pathetic i dont care because i know i;m not [bodytext] => You say it , but you have from the start
All these false rumors, they break my heart
People say I’m going crazy
But in my mind my thoughts are hazy
I never thought that if I let you in
You’d want out
I never thought that If I love you
I couldn’t really trust you
I feel chained
I feel locked up
I’m broken, just dead
I’m shattered, don’t fret
I’ll be here forever
You could give up but never
You miss me , I was never really here
You love me , You’re the only one I hold dear
Why am I laying here, why am I lost
Why is it cold, its so dark
I have always loved you right from the start
But where are you now
If your not who I thought
And if you loved me
please find me.
And if you need me
Please hold me
Because I’m lost
Because I’m crazy
Will I always be your baby?
So maybe you could live with my mistakes ,
Because that’s all I make
I lack so much
Just remember I’m not fake.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Naughtygurl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
i'm not fake

Contributed by Naughtygurl on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:09:20 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



You say it , but you have from the start
All these false rumors, they break my heart
People say I’m going crazy
But in my mind my thoughts are hazy
I never thought that if I let you in
You’d want out
I never thought that If I love you
I couldn’t really trust you
I feel chained
I feel locked up
I’m broken, just dead
I’m shattered, don’t fret
I’ll be here forever
You could give up but never
You miss me , I was never really here
You love me , You’re the only one I hold dear
Why am I laying here, why am I lost
Why is it cold, its so dark
I have always loved you right from the start
But where are you now
If your not who I thought
And if you loved me
please find me.
And if you need me
Please hold me
Because I’m lost
Because I’m crazy
Will I always be your baby?
So maybe you could live with my mistakes ,
Because that’s all I make
I lack so much
Just remember I’m not fake.




Copyright © Naughtygurl ... [ 2005-08-04 14:09:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: i'm not fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:12:40 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I understand where you are going with this write. I liked the words and emotions you expressed in it, a great write.


Re: i'm not fake (User Rating: 1 )
by ladydp2000 on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:16:47 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Very different and intriguing! I really liked it (:
Blessings!
Dorian


Re: i'm not fake (User Rating: 1 )
by je2ica3 on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:57:39 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
i like all the emotion great write


Re: i'm not fake (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 06:51:44 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
very sad ..


Re: i'm not fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 03:43:58 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Good write - almost like part of a conversation. You're getting a great start - nice word choices, no spelling mistakes. Best of luck and KEEP WRITING!!!
Blessings, J.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com