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All because of her

They hate her and her ways
They all just want her to go away

They hate having her in life
They just want to kill her with a knife

No one wants to life with her
They want to end her and not suffer

They want to tell her goodbye
And team together and make her die

Everyone hates her and wants her dead
They want to beat her over the head

They are annoyed with her and her pain
So they'll just throw her into the rain

You ask me how do I know all this?
Is this person I'm talking about my sis?

Nope, this she is really I,
So, come kill me, I'm ready to die [comments] => 7 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 13 [informant] => sprinter27 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Everyone Suffers Because of Her

Contributed by sprinter27 on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:32:57 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Everyone suffers
All because of her

They hate her and her ways
They all just want her to go away

They hate having her in life
They just want to kill her with a knife

No one wants to life with her
They want to end her and not suffer

They want to tell her goodbye
And team together and make her die

Everyone hates her and wants her dead
They want to beat her over the head

They are annoyed with her and her pain
So they'll just throw her into the rain

You ask me how do I know all this?
Is this person I'm talking about my sis?

Nope, this she is really I,
So, come kill me, I'm ready to die

Copyright © sprinter27 ... [ 2005-08-04 10:32:57]
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Re: Everyone Suffers Because of Her (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:39:44 AM AEST
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I can't just take a write like this and say, "good job" .. although the writing is good .. I'm sure it isn't true .. you feel bad right now.. we all have days like this ... I have months like that .. matter-of-fact, mine is going on a year now LOL .. but like I said .. your writing is great...sigh.

Re: Everyone Suffers Because of Her (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 03:27:54 PM AEST
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YEAH! NO OFFENCE BUT IT SOUNDS LIKE MY EX! HA! Sorry you feel the way you do, you are probably just feeling that way because you are upset with yourself, but you should not be so hard on yourself. SLipSiX.

Re: Everyone Suffers Because of Her (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 09:05:02 PM AEST
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awesome...but its kinda scary...cause thats how i feel right now! But I hope u r feeling better now. Gr8 job!

Re: Everyone Suffers Because of Her (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 09:57:52 PM AEST
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Good release of emotions Sprints...No one can tell you when to get out of a 'funk'. With time that will come, and people telling you otherwise should be ignored! Keep hanging out with your friends, and enjoy the good things as much as possible...It helps to get through the tough times.
Nicely done with this write : )

Scorp.

Re: Everyone Suffers Because of Her (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:59:37 AM AEST
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Very intense. I can feel the emotion and that is a mark of a great writer! So how about a hug instead? :)

Re: Everyone Suffers Because of Her (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 03:01:27 AM AEST
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P.S. Obviously you made no one suffer here with your wonderful and powerful write. :)

Re: Everyone Suffers Because of Her (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 11:12:16 PM AEST
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"Darkness
Like an icy cold is darkness
stries so untold
cause darkness is denying
and countless people dying because darkness"

Great write

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