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Array ( [sid] => 102630 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wrong Person [time] => 2005-08-04 03:41:11 [hometext] => i was turning the wrong way...comments appreciated [bodytext] => I need you but I'm not meant to
You reach out to me
With your blade, your hand
Take them away from here
i keep turnin' can't see clear
cause you're drivin me...

chorus
closer, closer
to where i shouldn't be
closer, closer
to where i need to be
can't get away
this is killin' me

i reach out to you in the cold
the warmth is saving me
till the mind freezes out your touch
i keep dying because
i keep calling for you
and you're drivin' me...

chorus
closer,closer
to where i shouldn't be
closer, closer
to where i need to be
can't get away
this is killin' me

intentions good, reactions bad
guilt overtaking your words
feelings aren't meant to be like this
i'm screaming only cause
you're drivin' me...

chorus
closer, closer
to where i shouldn't be
closer, closer
to where i need to be
can't get away
this is killin' me

shot down with your eyes
stop listening to my cries
i don't care for you
so i keep saying till
you drive me...

chorus fade out [comments] => 5 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 34 [informant] => guiltycircles [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Wrong Person

Contributed by guiltycircles on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 03:41:11 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



I need you but I'm not meant to
You reach out to me
With your blade, your hand
Take them away from here
i keep turnin' can't see clear
cause you're drivin me...

chorus
closer, closer
to where i shouldn't be
closer, closer
to where i need to be
can't get away
this is killin' me

i reach out to you in the cold
the warmth is saving me
till the mind freezes out your touch
i keep dying because
i keep calling for you
and you're drivin' me...

chorus
closer,closer
to where i shouldn't be
closer, closer
to where i need to be
can't get away
this is killin' me

intentions good, reactions bad
guilt overtaking your words
feelings aren't meant to be like this
i'm screaming only cause
you're drivin' me...

chorus
closer, closer
to where i shouldn't be
closer, closer
to where i need to be
can't get away
this is killin' me

shot down with your eyes
stop listening to my cries
i don't care for you
so i keep saying till
you drive me...

chorus fade out




Copyright © guiltycircles ... [ 2005-08-04 03:41:11]
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Re: Wrong Person (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:09:14 PM AEST
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Hm a very interesting poem, in the form of a song, I liked i. SLipSiX.


Re: Wrong Person (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:11:45 AM AEST
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incredible poem sophie
i love you
XoXo


Re: Wrong Person (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 10:52:10 AM AEST
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wow!
this is amazing!
it's REALLY good.
i especially liked the chorus. it's very sad and has that lonely impact, but keeps me believing the whole way through that you're a strong enough person to get through this.
=)
from rosie.


Re: Wrong Person (User Rating: 1 )
by SensitiveSoAbused on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 04:35:42 PM AEST
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...I'd like to hear this...


Re: Wrong Person (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 03:00:55 AM AEST
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Nice work. I really enjoyed this piece.




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