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Lost Love
Contributed by
Sherah
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Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 01:51:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I was young I lost my love ,
When I looked to the sky I saw a dove .
Waiting and watching to see what was next,
I saw the fish and heart and thought i was blessed.
The love that was lost is trying to find,
A place in my heart and in my mind.
The Fish stood for Life that I knew was gone,
The Heart stood for love that I had for so long.
The Dove stood for peace and I knew right away ,
That the love that I lost was the love that would stay.
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Sherah
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2005-08-04 01:51:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:34:25 AM AEST (User
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I am very sorry for the loss of your father. The signs you were given were beautiful. He will always be with you in spirit. This is a lovely poem and I thank you for sharing such a personal thing with us.
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Re: Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:30:45 PM AEST (User
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A very strong poem, I absolutely loved it, loved the ending, it tied all of it up. SLipSiX. |
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