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Array ( [sid] => 102586 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thinking Of Only Him [time] => 2005-08-03 15:38:59 [hometext] => First love is so hard to forget... [bodytext] => While sitting down on a rock
Mesmerizing the scenery of the valley
I am surrounded with mountains,
The beauty of life can not be seen
Beyond the grazing land

A gentle breeze drifts in the air
Pushing my long black hair on my face
This pictured a reflection of my past life
When I responded to his gentle touch
As he pushed my hair to give me a kiss

The feeling of the green grass flourishing,
Gives me shivers with pleasure,
When he was holding me tightly in his arms
I would swirl my fingers on his curls
Only to my first love, I would

My pleasure turns to terror, as I realize,
He is not here, never with me again
I stood up, ran as fast as I could, crying with pain
Thinking of only him, every move I make
Every touch I feel, every fragrance I smell,
Thinking of only him [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sukalaa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Thinking Of Only Him

Contributed by sukalaa on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 03:38:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

While sitting down on a rock
Mesmerizing the scenery of the valley
I am surrounded with mountains,
The beauty of life can not be seen
Beyond the grazing land

A gentle breeze drifts in the air
Pushing my long black hair on my face
This pictured a reflection of my past life
When I responded to his gentle touch
As he pushed my hair to give me a kiss

The feeling of the green grass flourishing,
Gives me shivers with pleasure,
When he was holding me tightly in his arms
I would swirl my fingers on his curls
Only to my first love, I would

My pleasure turns to terror, as I realize,
He is not here, never with me again
I stood up, ran as fast as I could, crying with pain
Thinking of only him, every move I make
Every touch I feel, every fragrance I smell,
Thinking of only him

Copyright © sukalaa ... [ 2005-08-03 15:38:59]
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Re: Thinking Of Only Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 03:41:36 PM AEST
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A good poem, beautifull scenes, nice vision of your first love. SLipSiX.

Re: Thinking Of Only Him (User Rating: 1 )
by Monkeybones99 on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 06:26:48 PM AEST
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This is a good poem....like said before very vivid scenery...and a truth about the first love.

Re: Thinking Of Only Him (User Rating: 1 )
by blackholesun on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 11:18:56 PM AEST
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oh my god! this made me cry,sweet you got a big heart and it shows:)keep up the good work ,and never stop showing these feelings:)peace&love

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