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Array ( [sid] => 102581 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => GOD, why [time] => 2005-08-03 14:28:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => God how could you do this to someone so good
Why would you give someone so much pain
Taking away all they had
Riddling them with cancer in the brain

God why would you give us a shread of hope
2 months or even a year added to her life
Her hair all gone, shes barely even there
And that shread of hope cut with a knife

God why watch her struggle
Watching her get weaker everyday
Now she lays still she cant move
God i hate you for taking her life away

God why cant you keep her on this earth
Is she to good she has to fly with the angels
No! god i refuse to let you take her
There will be no flying with the angels

God i beg you now
Please give her back to us
Please dont let her die
please God please give her back [comments] => 4 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 39 [informant] => bruised_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

GOD, why

Contributed by bruised_angel on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 02:28:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

God how could you do this to someone so good
Why would you give someone so much pain
Taking away all they had
Riddling them with cancer in the brain

God why would you give us a shread of hope
2 months or even a year added to her life
Her hair all gone, shes barely even there
And that shread of hope cut with a knife

God why watch her struggle
Watching her get weaker everyday
Now she lays still she cant move
God i hate you for taking her life away

God why cant you keep her on this earth
Is she to good she has to fly with the angels
No! god i refuse to let you take her
There will be no flying with the angels

God i beg you now
Please give her back to us
Please dont let her die
please God please give her back

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Re: GOD, why (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 02:44:17 PM AEST
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A very emotional yet sad write. I know how you feel, I felt like that once when a cancer killed my grandpa, and I live with the pain, I regret it untill this day that I never went to see him before he died, I always had the chance but I never went to see him, and I think of him everyday. The best you can do is remember the good times you had with your loved one. I am sorry she had to go away, I am sorry for your loss. A very emotional poem. SLipSiX.

Re: GOD, why (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 02:55:18 PM AEST
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it isn't really God's fault .. but it may seem like that. Very emotional write.

Re: GOD, why (User Rating: 1 )
by poisonpen00ad on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 10:06:53 PM AEST
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As a cancer surviver I still ask why.....It has changed me forever and not for the best either.....My heart, thoughts and prayers are with you and your family.

C.

Re: GOD, why (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 03:29:41 PM AEST
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this is heart wrenching. Most have been in situations where we question God's motives and plans.

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