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Array ( [sid] => 102568 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Darkened Pain [time] => 2005-08-03 10:08:48 [hometext] => Its not the best poem but i was very upset. [bodytext] => The blood poured out,
After the bruises appeared,
I thought the darkness would hide me,
But i was wrong and i was found.

Scared to go out,
Yet i was still found,
No where to run to,
Surrounded in a corner.

The anger rose as i started to cry,
The hope of escape,
Gradually faded away,
As did my strength.

A kick in the back,
made me fall to the floor,
A hit to my head,
made me go against the wall.

The pains through my body,
I wanted to run,
From the torture,
From the man i called dad,

The only option left,
Was to grab the knife,
To dig in slowly,
To end my life. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Beni [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Darkened Pain

Contributed by Beni on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 10:08:48 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

The blood poured out,
After the bruises appeared,
I thought the darkness would hide me,
But i was wrong and i was found.

Scared to go out,
Yet i was still found,
No where to run to,
Surrounded in a corner.

The anger rose as i started to cry,
The hope of escape,
Gradually faded away,
As did my strength.

A kick in the back,
made me fall to the floor,
A hit to my head,
made me go against the wall.

The pains through my body,
I wanted to run,
From the torture,
From the man i called dad,

The only option left,
Was to grab the knife,
To dig in slowly,
To end my life.

Copyright © Beni ... [ 2005-08-03 10:08:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Darkened Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by bethie on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 10:37:45 AM AEST
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A very disturbign write. But why would you inflict the same abuse on your self that you know is so wrong.

Re: Darkened Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:56:30 PM AEST
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to end your life? then how is it you write?

Re: Darkened Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 03:00:01 PM AEST
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Wow. Very emotional piece, especially the last two stanzas...You expressed yourself well, and I hope things get better for you...

Scorp.

Re: Darkened Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 03:16:25 PM AEST
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I do not know what to say about this poem, usually stay away from poems with self harm, but the end of it just seemed so painfull it seemed to make me feel sick.

Re: Darkened Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexi_Lexi on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:51:27 PM AEST
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This is the saddest poem that i have ever read by you it brought a tear 2 my eye....makes me wana cry and i am always here 4 u wot an amazing poem. Luv ya xxx

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