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Array ( [sid] => 102518 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Magic of Evening [time] => 2005-08-02 17:45:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => See the daytime meet the night
Darkness blending with the light
Burning bronze at close of day
Softly fades to silver grey

Cobweb mists on velvet cloud
Luminous moon shakes off her shroud
See the Plough amongst the stars
The Bear and planets linked with Mars

Waiting there as evening falls
Imagination softly calls
Miracles of land and sky
Feel your sense start to fly

Sitting here so calm and still
Rest and relax all your will
Lift your eyes and float away
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Magic of Evening

Contributed by gwenevere on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 05:45:32 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

See the daytime meet the night
Darkness blending with the light
Burning bronze at close of day
Softly fades to silver grey

Cobweb mists on velvet cloud
Luminous moon shakes off her shroud
See the Plough amongst the stars
The Bear and planets linked with Mars

Waiting there as evening falls
Imagination softly calls
Miracles of land and sky
Feel your sense start to fly

Sitting here so calm and still
Rest and relax all your will
Lift your eyes and float away
Upwards to the milky way

Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-08-02 17:45:32]
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Re: Magic of Evening (User Rating: 1 )
by all_that_i_can_be on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:15:01 PM AEST
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it made me smile. total warm fuzzies. i like it.

Re: Magic of Evening (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:31:14 PM AEST
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a lovely poem with so great imagery attached to it. i dont think theres one bad line in this poem. good stuff!

Re: Magic of Evening (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 07:52:25 PM AEST
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wow, you really put the reader into the scene! i felt calm just reading it. awesome job.

Re: Magic of Evening (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 09:51:11 PM AEST
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this was a very wonderful write. keep up the good poetry

Re: Magic of Evening (User Rating: 1 )
by Erualaitalmarea on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 05:34:30 PM AEST
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That was awesome, I loved it :), such an imagination

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