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Array ( [sid] => 102481 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ain't The Same [time] => 2005-08-02 01:57:03 [hometext] => This is my first POEM-Song....PLEASE be honest and tell me what ya'll think about it....thanks!! [bodytext] => all these people in this world become so cruel

racism, violent things that just aint right

cant walk outside just to look around

without having to come in because of a fight

i cant get theses things out of my mind

heartbreaks you get over

love-aches, time changes

people dying and lying, killing lovers

we take are arms not understanding

just because of religon and oppions

we take our place

in the hurting

we dont realize how much damage is done

saying things that supposed to be funny

hurts in someone elses heart

tradin kids in for money

familys falling apart



pre-chorus

its not worth it



chorus

look into there eyes

so what do you see?

just another person

just like you and me

feeling the same

in all different ways

time measures pain

and this world aint the same

this world aint the same



i dont see why they cant just wake up and realize

there the same as everyone else

but still nobodys perfect

its not about your self

people shooting out schools

laughing, making fun of different people

see those kinds of things

turns happy into plee'd-able

alchol, drugs and father-less kids

nobody knows what there feeling inside

wishing they were like everybody else

just not taking this ride

between, the cutting, the hunger

the hitting, the hurse

i dont know whys God's

Letting things get worse

Nothings, ever gonna be the same



pre-chorus

its not worth it



chorus

look into there eyes

so what do you see?

just another person

just like you and me

feeling the same

in all different ways

time measures pain

and this world aint the same

this world aint the same



Famous people wasting money

when people are starving

Getting away with murder

The more for the bargain

Be happy with who you are

God made you one of a kind

Dont take nothing for granite

It's not hooked at your side

dont hang up on your friends

just because of mixed feelings

emotions running wild

nothing tempting or to revealing

this world would be a better place

if people could just see

that all things are possible

there just like you and me



pre-chorus

its not worth it



chorus

look into there eyes

so what do you see?

just another person

just like you and me

feeling the same

in all different ways

time measures pain

and this world aint the same

this world aint the same

no this world aint the same

( 2x )
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Ain't The Same

Contributed by booger on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:57:03 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



all these people in this world become so cruel

racism, violent things that just aint right

cant walk outside just to look around

without having to come in because of a fight

i cant get theses things out of my mind

heartbreaks you get over

love-aches, time changes

people dying and lying, killing lovers

we take are arms not understanding

just because of religon and oppions

we take our place

in the hurting

we dont realize how much damage is done

saying things that supposed to be funny

hurts in someone elses heart

tradin kids in for money

familys falling apart



pre-chorus

its not worth it



chorus

look into there eyes

so what do you see?

just another person

just like you and me

feeling the same

in all different ways

time measures pain

and this world aint the same

this world aint the same



i dont see why they cant just wake up and realize

there the same as everyone else

but still nobodys perfect

its not about your self

people shooting out schools

laughing, making fun of different people

see those kinds of things

turns happy into plee'd-able

alchol, drugs and father-less kids

nobody knows what there feeling inside

wishing they were like everybody else

just not taking this ride

between, the cutting, the hunger

the hitting, the hurse

i dont know whys God's

Letting things get worse

Nothings, ever gonna be the same



pre-chorus

its not worth it



chorus

look into there eyes

so what do you see?

just another person

just like you and me

feeling the same

in all different ways

time measures pain

and this world aint the same

this world aint the same



Famous people wasting money

when people are starving

Getting away with murder

The more for the bargain

Be happy with who you are

God made you one of a kind

Dont take nothing for granite

It's not hooked at your side

dont hang up on your friends

just because of mixed feelings

emotions running wild

nothing tempting or to revealing

this world would be a better place

if people could just see

that all things are possible

there just like you and me



pre-chorus

its not worth it



chorus

look into there eyes

so what do you see?

just another person

just like you and me

feeling the same

in all different ways

time measures pain

and this world aint the same

this world aint the same

no this world aint the same

( 2x )




Copyright © booger ... [ 2005-08-02 01:57:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Ain't The Same (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:47:36 AM AEST
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I honestly liked it. Criticism- after the first chorus you used THE too much.
Good song

Brooke




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