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Array ( [sid] => 102476 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heart Ache..... [time] => 2005-08-02 01:08:24 [hometext] => this is the first poem i have ever wrote.....(bear) with it....lol.... [bodytext] => My heat aches so much,
I don't know what to do,
Should I just walk away?
And forget the way we ust to play,
And forget the memories,
The lips,
The brightness of your smile,
The way we ust to hold each other?
I can't,
And even whill your trying to forget me,
i'll struggle on; keeping the memories close,
Never letting them slip,
And even when it feels so hopeless,
I'll remember the way we ust to kiss,
And i'll start to remember again,....
..........I love you so much,
Words can't even describe,
The way i feel inside,
The way i hurt when i see you sad,
But if you really want to forget me,
I won't be mad,
Although i'll have to admit,
My heart will be split,
And i may even cry,
But i,ll say good bye,
And then all that will remain,
Is the pain,
OF knowing i will never truley be yours,
I hate to think that,
I loved you so much,
I don't even think you know the pain you have caused,
I've never been one to share my feelings,
but maybe it might just change your mind,
And you'll realize,
That forgeting me isn't the right path to take,
I know it isn't your falt,
And i don't despise thoes who hold us apart,
I just wish they'd realize how i've changed,
Becaues then we could exchange,
The feeling i (think) we both feel,
But for now,
I'll go on woundering how i'm going to survive,
with-out your love,



~by:Barry Kothe~
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Heart Ache.....

Contributed by zer0_kool on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:08:24 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



My heat aches so much,
I don't know what to do,
Should I just walk away?
And forget the way we ust to play,
And forget the memories,
The lips,
The brightness of your smile,
The way we ust to hold each other?
I can't,
And even whill your trying to forget me,
i'll struggle on; keeping the memories close,
Never letting them slip,
And even when it feels so hopeless,
I'll remember the way we ust to kiss,
And i'll start to remember again,....
..........I love you so much,
Words can't even describe,
The way i feel inside,
The way i hurt when i see you sad,
But if you really want to forget me,
I won't be mad,
Although i'll have to admit,
My heart will be split,
And i may even cry,
But i,ll say good bye,
And then all that will remain,
Is the pain,
OF knowing i will never truley be yours,
I hate to think that,
I loved you so much,
I don't even think you know the pain you have caused,
I've never been one to share my feelings,
but maybe it might just change your mind,
And you'll realize,
That forgeting me isn't the right path to take,
I know it isn't your falt,
And i don't despise thoes who hold us apart,
I just wish they'd realize how i've changed,
Becaues then we could exchange,
The feeling i (think) we both feel,
But for now,
I'll go on woundering how i'm going to survive,
with-out your love,



~by:Barry Kothe~




Copyright © zer0_kool ... [ 2005-08-02 01:08:24]
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Re: Heart Ache..... (User Rating: 1 )
by zer0_kool on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:12:59 AM AEST
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i've writin....lots others....this is just the one that got me started really got me started on poetry.......


Re: Heart Ache..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:20:43 AM AEST
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it was a gr8 write! just keep up the gr8 work!


Re: Heart Ache..... (User Rating: 1 )
by poisonpen00ad on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:39:50 AM AEST
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Love the raw emotion expressed here.


Re: Heart Ache..... (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:38:13 AM AEST
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sad, but good write. i like how you expressed yourself in this write and showed the emotion. and i am sorry that you have to put up with the pain. if i could i would take your pain away, but it doesn't work. cause i want to take away all the pain from my best friend's life and she still has the pain. i hate to see others suffer. and just know that if i could, i would hurt this pain for you instead of making you do it. good write, keep it up and i wish you lots of luck that you can win her back or move on!

~sprints


Re: Heart Ache..... (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 10:28:55 PM AEST
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Yes, love can hurt............but if its meant to be it will be there always. Good write, it is from the heart, and that is what counts. Nice posting.

Brew~


Re: Heart Ache..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:20:06 PM AEST
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Heart ache is a good title, but it would almost be better to call it heart break...The reader can hear the heart being torn to shreds. While it's not a comforting thought, it is a sign of good expression..now, I think I'll go find a tissue and cry some more




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