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So we can march across this ancient land
This burial ground of all those old
As in wonderment we lie hand in hand

Here amid these inscribed graves
You confess your love for me
Which shall never cease or fade
Like the dove that sings so merrily

Residing with the non-living
It is tonight I feel so darkly alive
While embracing our final end now
On every waking moment let’s thrive

So when we do die
I’ll lie here next to you…

Just like this

I’ll remember this always
Together, as we lie amongst the dead
Our beating hearts with those at rest
The way our souls are lead

Let’s reside here forever
Until these buried bones do rot away
And the moon does mask us
Until the start of day

Just you and I…

Laying in the graveyard.
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Laying Together in the Graveyard

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:21:27 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Open the rust worn gates
So we can march across this ancient land
This burial ground of all those old
As in wonderment we lie hand in hand

Here amid these inscribed graves
You confess your love for me
Which shall never cease or fade
Like the dove that sings so merrily

Residing with the non-living
It is tonight I feel so darkly alive
While embracing our final end now
On every waking moment let’s thrive

So when we do die
I’ll lie here next to you…

Just like this

I’ll remember this always
Together, as we lie amongst the dead
Our beating hearts with those at rest
The way our souls are lead

Let’s reside here forever
Until these buried bones do rot away
And the moon does mask us
Until the start of day

Just you and I…

Laying in the graveyard.

Copyright Â© pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-08-01 21:21:27]
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Re: Laying Together in the Graveyard (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:53:36 PM AEST
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ooooo! i do like this one :D!! it painted such a pritty picture in my head...loved it..it kinda reminded me of this poem i made...cant member if i posted it but o well, great write keep it up!!

Jenni xxoo

Re: Laying Together in the Graveyard (User Rating: 1 )
by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:56:43 PM AEST
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very interesting and different. i like it. dark.

Re: Laying Together in the Graveyard (User Rating: 1 )
by poisonpen00ad on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:18:09 AM AEST
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You always capture me with your writing. I bow to your greatness once more.

Re: Laying Together in the Graveyard (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:54:32 AM AEST
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wow this is beautiful and haunting.
you did a wonderful job on this.
this part i like the most

Let’s reside here forever
Until these buried bones do rot away
And the moon does mask us
Until the start of day

amazing.

Re: Laying Together in the Graveyard (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:08:03 PM AEST
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i have honestly never read a poem quite like this one
great write
loved it
-->Rae

Re: Laying Together in the Graveyard (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 07:59:57 PM AEST
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You get better and darker with each new post Rach-

"Let’s reside here forever
Until these buried bones do rot away
And the moon does mask us
Until the start of day

Just you and I…

Laying in the graveyard."

and again it was a brilliant ending my friend-
those last two lines..
magnificent!

B

Re: Laying Together in the Graveyard (User Rating: 1 )
by HiddenDeath999 on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:15:43 PM AEST
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I love it......dark with romance *grins*

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