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Array ( [sid] => 102415 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => More than One Eternity [time] => 2005-08-01 02:45:18 [hometext] => For those who miss my more romantic writes here you go and babe I love you [bodytext] => I am whole
And completely vulnerable
When ever I am around you
I could be so easily broken
More so when are the reason
Why I have wings
I love you so
So much more than anything
More than anything or anyone ever
You are my whole world
My angel you have a name
Robin and with that name
My hopes and dreams fly up
And all doubt remains below
I know that you love me
That is all i can ever need
You are the cure to all
That makes me ill
I am alive
Only because of your
Sweet kisses on my
Tired desperate brow
From your eyes I
Take my nourishment
From your lips
All can be reborn
Only by your side can I rest
For we are how Shelly wrote
One spirit with two frames
And one hope with two wills
That is how we will always be
I belive that we can last
Perhaps for more than just
One eternity [comments] => 4 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

More than One Eternity

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:45:18 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I am whole
And completely vulnerable
When ever I am around you
I could be so easily broken
More so when are the reason
Why I have wings
I love you so
So much more than anything
More than anything or anyone ever
You are my whole world
My angel you have a name
Robin and with that name
My hopes and dreams fly up
And all doubt remains below
I know that you love me
That is all i can ever need
You are the cure to all
That makes me ill
I am alive
Only because of your
Sweet kisses on my
Tired desperate brow
From your eyes I
Take my nourishment
From your lips
All can be reborn
Only by your side can I rest
For we are how Shelly wrote
One spirit with two frames
And one hope with two wills
That is how we will always be
I belive that we can last
Perhaps for more than just
One eternity

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-08-01 02:45:18]
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Re: More than One Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:49:49 AM AEST
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GREAT WRITE!! I LOVED THE END!

Re: More than One Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:42:42 PM AEST
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thanks for posting this ..really like your style!!!

Re: More than One Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:22:18 AM AEST
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awe, you still have not lost your touch, amazingly beautiful, muaw

Re: More than One Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 03:48:16 AM AEST
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One can feel the tender, luving passion in these words.
So sweet.
huggs,
emy
A masterpeice of a luving heart, body, soul.

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