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That she’s held in for years

But these tears are unusual
They have a red visual

Her tears don’t taste of water and salt,
They taste of blood and it’s all her fault

For too long she has held back her tears
She held it all in, didn’t cry for years

Now her tears are full of pain
And her tears don’t look like rain

They are of a thick red,
Staining her pillow and bed

She can’t stop them from falling,
Now she’s in pain and is calling

She’s losing blood through tears
And there is no one near

Now she remembers why she’s crying
She was so sick and tired of trying

There was no one around
It was just her and her frown

The red- it’s is spilling out,
To stop the tears is a doubt

All that she has gone through,
She misses all and is calling to you

Blood spilling out her eyes,
Pouring out as she cries

Her tears are blood, not water,
To breathe becomes only harder

She sheds these tears,
All the blood over the years
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Tears of Blood

Contributed by sprinter27 on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:04:32 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

She is crying the tears,
That she’s held in for years

But these tears are unusual
They have a red visual

Her tears don’t taste of water and salt,
They taste of blood and it’s all her fault

For too long she has held back her tears
She held it all in, didn’t cry for years

Now her tears are full of pain
And her tears don’t look like rain

They are of a thick red,
Staining her pillow and bed

She can’t stop them from falling,
Now she’s in pain and is calling

She’s losing blood through tears
And there is no one near

Now she remembers why she’s crying
She was so sick and tired of trying

There was no one around
It was just her and her frown

The red- it’s is spilling out,
To stop the tears is a doubt

All that she has gone through,
She misses all and is calling to you

Blood spilling out her eyes,
Pouring out as she cries

Her tears are blood, not water,
To breathe becomes only harder

She sheds these tears,
All the blood over the years

Copyright Â© sprinter27 ... [ 2005-07-31 22:04:32]
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Re: Tears of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:10:35 PM AEST
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Excellent...i loved it! I havent cried in a while...i just sorta lock all of my pain inside of me...and that isnt healthy...i know. But i loved your poem. It was awesome...just keep it up!

Re: Tears of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by zer0_kool on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:50:00 PM AEST
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WoW...Amazing.....I can relat to this...the only diffrence is that i am a (male)....i Really liked it...keep up the good work.

Re: Tears of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:01:35 PM AEST
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gee ... don't tempt me to get my razor again .. I feel like it.. the tears don't come and ... yeah well you know. It's one of those days.. cheer me up you did!

Re: Tears of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty06 on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:50:18 PM AEST
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I like how you made the drops of blood be tears. I wrote something similar in my poem Silent Crimson Night. The lines 'Now she remembers why she’s crying She was so sick and tired of trying' really give this poem life and makes the line 'To breathe becomes only harder' more power. An excellent write.

Re: Tears of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:36:26 PM AEST
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wow this is a nice poem, i reely enjoyed this one, nice flow and greatness...lol n e ways good job!

Jenni xxoo

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