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Array ( [sid] => 102373 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => broken window pain [time] => 2005-07-31 15:31:07 [hometext] => i was a fan of this site [bodytext] => walking in a moonless sky
watching zombies strolling by
sold their souls another walking dead
looking at their eyes feeling their dread
cockroaches scurry on the city street
looking for that sale or there favorite coffee drink
the light of a car as they scope out the scene
selling there dope destroying people's dream

gangs and junkies marking their way
one will die by the end of the day
watching all this from my window view
seeing the shame as the population grew
blinded by green the kind that fold
watching this game i feel it grow old

dancing in death the girls make their stance
selling their bodies for that next hit by chance
rot in our world in these roads made of gold
truth isnt the answer so i am told
alone at my view a tear in my eye
waiting for this world to stand up and try

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broken window pain

Contributed by lostrelic on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 03:31:07 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

walking in a moonless sky
watching zombies strolling by
sold their souls another walking dead
looking at their eyes feeling their dread
cockroaches scurry on the city street
looking for that sale or there favorite coffee drink
the light of a car as they scope out the scene
selling there dope destroying people's dream

gangs and junkies marking their way
one will die by the end of the day
watching all this from my window view
seeing the shame as the population grew
blinded by green the kind that fold
watching this game i feel it grow old

dancing in death the girls make their stance
selling their bodies for that next hit by chance
rot in our world in these roads made of gold
truth isnt the answer so i am told
alone at my view a tear in my eye
waiting for this world to stand up and try

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2005-07-31 15:31:07]
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Re: broken window pain (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 04:06:01 PM AEST
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that was an awesome poem, i remembered your name and thought i'd
read this. you did a real good job, as sad and dark as it is. and realistic.

~kara~~waos~

Re: broken window pain (User Rating: 1 )
by smilez101 on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 05:06:59 PM AEST
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That poem was so good because i see these same things day 2 day. It had actually made me cry because I felt it so much. Thank you for that one.

Re: broken window pain (User Rating: 1 )
by suicidal_imbecile on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:39:18 PM AEST
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holy shat man, intense poem. I loved it. except for the fact that i am among those you watch. thanks for putting it in perspective for me
kate

Re: broken window pain (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:54:38 PM AEST
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waiting for this world to stand up and try

I liked this last line a lot ...

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