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[aid] => mick
[title] => THE PROPOSAL
[time] => 2005-07-31 02:09:33
[hometext] => This one got my tickle bone, so had to create a poem, I hope you enjoy it as much as I did.
[bodytext] => 
THE PROPOSAL
Two elderly people reside in a
Florida mobile home residency
He was a widower, she
a widow and cheery.
Long time companions over many years.
This night they attended a party
together with peers.
Facing each other across the table,
He made admiring glances at her
and was thoughtful.....
Gathering his courage to ask her
"Will you marry me for bad or better?"
After about six seconds of careful consideration,
She replied, "Yes, Yes, I will, you nice person,"
When the meal ended they said good-bye
Each going to their respective homes nearby
The next morning he was troubled.
"Did she say 'yes' or did she say 'no'?"
he mumbled.
Try as he would, he couldn't recall!!
Not even a faint memory--his downfall,
With much trepidation he went to the
telephone and called her.
When she answered he began to murmur....
"I don't remember as well as I used to do."
Then he reviewed the lovely evening thereto.
Gathering up his courage, he then inquired,"
I asked you to marry me last night, was
I refused or honored?"
She was delighted that he called her back,
"Why, I said, "yes, yes I will, with no drawback."
"Glad that you called because I couldn't remember"
she said boldly
"Who it was that had asked me!"
Created from
an email....
the poem is mine.
Lovingcritters
consue
July 31, 2005
"God gave us a memory so that we might
have roses in December."
~J. M. B arrie~
Author
"Forgetful Smiles?"
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[ratings] => 7
[editpoem] => 1
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THE PROPOSAL
Contributed by
Lovingcritters
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:09:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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THE PROPOSAL
Two elderly people reside in a
Florida mobile home residency
He was a widower, she
a widow and cheery.
Long time companions over many years.
This night they attended a party
together with peers.
Facing each other across the table,
He made admiring glances at her
and was thoughtful.....
Gathering his courage to ask her
"Will you marry me for bad or better?"
After about six seconds of careful consideration,
She replied, "Yes, Yes, I will, you nice person,"
When the meal ended they said good-bye
Each going to their respective homes nearby
The next morning he was troubled.
"Did she say 'yes' or did she say 'no'?"
he mumbled.
Try as he would, he couldn't recall!!
Not even a faint memory--his downfall,
With much trepidation he went to the
telephone and called her.
When she answered he began to murmur....
"I don't remember as well as I used to do."
Then he reviewed the lovely evening thereto.
Gathering up his courage, he then inquired,"
I asked you to marry me last night, was
I refused or honored?"
She was delighted that he called her back,
"Why, I said, "yes, yes I will, with no drawback."
"Glad that you called because I couldn't remember"
she said boldly
"Who it was that had asked me!"
Created from
an email....
the poem is mine.
Lovingcritters
consue
July 31, 2005
"God gave us a memory so that we might
have roses in December."
~J. M. B arrie~
Author
"Forgetful Smiles?"
Copyright ©
Lovingcritters
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2005-07-31 02:09:33]
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Re: THE PROPOSAL
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 03:58:43 AM AEST
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aww what a sweet write.
awsome consue.
love and hugs |
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Re: THE PROPOSAL
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 04:42:16 AM AEST
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lol I very much enjoyed this write ConSue! Your poetry always brings a smile to my face, and often a giggle too: )
A sweet, lighthearted tale...very nice!!
Scorp. |
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by Eclipse on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:52:43 AM AEST
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it's great to see that you're writing about something light- great work
luv eclipse xxx |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 08:58:46 AM AEST
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| This is one of my favourite poems by you. It really is so refreshing to read poetry about happier subjects and the twist at the end is just so typical of your style. Christopher. |
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Re: THE PROPOSAL
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:29:43 AM AEST
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How wonderful and so very adorable. Thanks again for the smiles Sue
Loves Angelxxxxx |
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Re: THE PROPOSAL
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by bernard2 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:51:00 AM AEST
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| As an oldie Consue I appreciate this one very much. It reminds me of an elderly couple that I once knew. Talk about forgetful. they gave us some great laughs. I remember one day the elderly lady asked her partner,"Did I put my knickers on before I left home?" his answer was. "We dont say knickers do we, we say panties nowadays." I and my loving wife were in fits laughing . Keep writing Consue hugs from Martha and bernard. |
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Re: THE PROPOSAL
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:38:53 PM AEST
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Absolutely "delightful"!
Bless you for your good humor, it's a thing most urgently needed.
This work makes the body and soul rejoice!
Oh how I love these sort of things!
Just what I needed so badly. and many others with me I bet..
Blessed are the cheerful!
Thanks for sharing ConSue
Warm love
Elizabeth |
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Re: THE PROPOSAL
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by Dusty on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 04:25:58 PM AEST
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OK, I'm still giggling. How cute and light!
Dusty |
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Re: THE PROPOSAL
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by CarolinaBlue on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:24:52 PM AEST
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awwwww Connie How sweet and endearing this is! Two peas in a pod, just meant for each other. I'm left with a wonderful smile upon my face once again. Thanks for sharing.
~Blue~ |
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Re: THE PROPOSAL
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by brew on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 07:27:36 PM AEST
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Hilarious....and cute lil ditty. Loved this, but all of the pics and words you type are all wonderful. Where do you find these things? Guess, I need to look up more pics, for some of the writes I post. Again wonderful story, and you were right, it was hilarious.
Brew~ |
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Re: THE PROPOSAL
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:47:25 AM AEST
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I hear ya,
sounds about right.
Good work, mom.
luv, huggs,
yobrat,
emy |
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Re: THE PROPOSAL
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 06:13:50 PM AEST
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Aw Momma ConSue, u see now what I'm talking about? You always bring a smile to my face and giggles to go along with that too. This was a brillant write. I loved it. Always cleverly done Momma dear.
love n hugs,
Dreamer |
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Re: THE PROPOSAL
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by Stitch on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 05:35:08 PM AEST
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From my first day on this site, you have never ceased to make me smile. I actually and looking forward to these forgetful days that will be coming my way thanks to you.
Stitch |
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