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wondering off the path
I've fallen behind my shadow
into my rain
tears always find me
and the sun never rising
darkness is my light
losing how things were
only knowing the suffering of others
but do not worry
for i am not alone
in this never ending nightmare called life
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Life

Contributed by Jen54 on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:11:42 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I feel I've lost myself
wondering off the path
I've fallen behind my shadow
into my rain
tears always find me
and the sun never rising
darkness is my light
losing how things were
only knowing the suffering of others
but do not worry
for i am not alone
in this never ending nightmare called life

Copyright © Jen54 ... [ 2005-07-31 01:11:42]
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Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by cooley1818 on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:17:33 AM AEST
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great write, i really enjoyed this, i can really relate to this, i feel as if life is nothing more then just a nightmare, or hell its self, it really sux to feel that way, but oh well, i just keep livin on and try to enjoy life if i can, and i hope u can do the same

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:26:31 AM AEST
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so good keep it up wow post more

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:28:40 AM AEST
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No your right about that.....you have company that's for sure.

Great write tho, thanks for sharing.

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:34:43 AM AEST
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nice ending i love the ending haha i always try to do that

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by bethie on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:25:12 PM AEST
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A wise man told me once that: "Life is a tough knot".

You express this very well in your poem.

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetoccasion29 on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:14:59 PM AEST
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this ran over with emotion, life at times is sheer hell great write

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:00:56 PM AEST
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This is a powerful and emotional write, I have felt the despair and sadness that you write of and I hope you find happiness !!! Well written

Hugs Leia36

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:43:52 AM AEST
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Jennifer, that was a emotionally powerful write. Happiness will find you and you will find happiness. This is very well worded and thought provoking.

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 08:00:41 AM AEST
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Indeed youre not alone, Jen. Many others are sharing in similar pain and you are helping the fight by posting your feelings of anguish and suffering.
You have a great talent, keep it up!

Dan

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 07:52:50 PM AEST
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your not alone and life doesn't have to be a nightmare if you have people who care deeply for you like i do

Tiff

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 09:42:48 PM AEST
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you're not alone. life doesn't have to be a nightmare if you have people that care.

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