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The nightmares, the cold sweat
The numbness and blurred vision
The feelings being processed
The voices in my head

The panics rising up inside of me again
As I dream of all the hollow words that caved in
I should have been a pawn to a beautiful queen
But I was my own destruction this time it seems

All the pretty colors are turning grey
All the pretty moments have gone away
'Cause I can hear both of their hearts chyme
Somebody tell me it's all in my mind
Somebody tell me this desperation I feel
and the vomit on the floor isn't real

Quick breathing, tears seeping
The terror of error
The darkness drowning the light
The head-ache, the heart break
Farewell and goodnight,
farewell and goodnight to you [comments] => 5 [counter] => 296 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Asthenia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Paranoia

Contributed by Asthenia on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 11:05:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

"Paranoia"

The nightmares, the cold sweat
The numbness and blurred vision
The feelings being processed
The voices in my head

The panics rising up inside of me again
As I dream of all the hollow words that caved in
I should have been a pawn to a beautiful queen
But I was my own destruction this time it seems

All the pretty colors are turning grey
All the pretty moments have gone away
'Cause I can hear both of their hearts chyme
Somebody tell me it's all in my mind
Somebody tell me this desperation I feel
and the vomit on the floor isn't real

Quick breathing, tears seeping
The terror of error
The darkness drowning the light
The head-ache, the heart break
Farewell and goodnight,
farewell and goodnight to you

Copyright © Asthenia ... [ 2005-07-30 23:05:27]
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Re: Paranoia (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:49:47 AM AEST
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I thought this was a very piece.

Very raw and honest indeed.

A great attempt at conveying one's private hysteria. I liked it.

Thanks for sharing.

Re: Paranoia (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:54:18 AM AEST
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i think that from the beggining you really buid up tension in the reader and the automatically grabs thier attention. great write!

Re: Paranoia (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 12:56:17 AM AEST
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Very effective use of description here, good job

Raquel Leah :D

Re: Paranoia (User Rating: 1 )
by summer on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:42:52 AM AEST
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liked this really conveyed well.
x

Re: Paranoia (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:34:37 PM AEST
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This is a really good poem, I like it a lot.

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