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Array ( [sid] => 102332 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the beauty is gone [time] => 2005-07-30 20:17:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => would beauty be beautiful
if it was a human that made it
or is beauty only what we percieve
like skinny girls life flushed from thier face

maybe beauty is that thing that makes you smile
or just another tickle
possibly something we cant see
beauty is what we feel

could it be that beauty never existed
or disapeared long ago
'when we decided to destroy the enemy
cause we cant comprimise
someone has to be right

but why did we do it
we cant blame the devil
its all our own fault that beauty disapeared
why does everyone blame
they cant just accept that they failed and they are sorry?

beauty is the mind
the mind that wishes to destroy
where is beauty in a world of hipocracy
dont blame the disapearance on someone
who cant control you

you are your own person
and everyone destroyed it.
that flower that you stepped on
that fox that you shot
was the beauty that the world
no longer has got ...
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the beauty is gone

Contributed by hardrocker15198916 on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 08:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

would beauty be beautiful
if it was a human that made it
or is beauty only what we percieve
like skinny girls life flushed from thier face

maybe beauty is that thing that makes you smile
or just another tickle
possibly something we cant see
beauty is what we feel

could it be that beauty never existed
or disapeared long ago
'when we decided to destroy the enemy
cause we cant comprimise
someone has to be right

but why did we do it
we cant blame the devil
its all our own fault that beauty disapeared
why does everyone blame
they cant just accept that they failed and they are sorry?

beauty is the mind
the mind that wishes to destroy
where is beauty in a world of hipocracy
dont blame the disapearance on someone
who cant control you

you are your own person
and everyone destroyed it.
that flower that you stepped on
that fox that you shot
was the beauty that the world
no longer has got ...

Copyright © hardrocker15198916 ... [ 2005-07-30 20:17:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: the beauty is gone (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 08:38:11 PM AEST
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a very powerful write that I enjoyed very much you touched on many subjects throughout and it makes the reader take a breath and really think
Michelle

Re: the beauty is gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 11:42:38 PM AEST
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theres a bit of a problem with recycling beauty too many times in this. your ending is the best, because it really came together. i think you had many thought provoking lines in this, which made this well worth the read.

Re: the beauty is gone (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:57:55 AM AEST
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Thought-provoking piece.

All apt questions we must ask ourselves.

It was deep but I found it held alot of meaning and it was written well.

Great job.

Re: the beauty is gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Eclipse on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:56:46 AM AEST
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how true that is- well done!

luv eclipse xxx

Re: the beauty is gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Caged Soul on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 06:33:47 AM AEST
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this is a very good piece of writing 'ere, my friend.

dont blame the disapearance on someone
who cant control you

you are your own person
and everyone destroyed it.

these lines for me was the most powerful in the poem. I enjoyed how the poem built up to the end and hoe the same was so cleverly done.

Much Love
Ash

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