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Array ( [sid] => 102320 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm over you [time] => 2005-07-30 16:34:17 [hometext] => It's my first poem ever! i know it sucks but its okay. [bodytext] =>
it's funny how i thought
i could never be okay
i could never be alright

but as time goes by
its getting easier
as the clocks ticks by
the pain disappears

i don't feel it,
it doesn't hurt

its funny how i thought
without u i couldnt live
without u i couldnt go on

but as days go by
the memories dont sting
as dusk turns into dawn
i cant reach you like i did

i try my best and slowly
it goes away, its starting to fade

its funny how i thought
things would never change
that you would never change

but as every breath i take
im starting to understand
with every beat of my heart
its slowing sinking in

you're not here anymore
and never can be..
i don't want to
but i am
and i wish i didn't have to
but i am
i am ...finally over you.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 22 [informant] => truthhurts [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I'm over you

Contributed by truthhurts on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:34:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

it's funny how i thought
i could never be okay
i could never be alright

but as time goes by
its getting easier
as the clocks ticks by
the pain disappears

i don't feel it,
it doesn't hurt

its funny how i thought
without u i couldnt live
without u i couldnt go on

but as days go by
the memories dont sting
as dusk turns into dawn
i cant reach you like i did

i try my best and slowly
it goes away, its starting to fade

its funny how i thought
things would never change
that you would never change

but as every breath i take
im starting to understand
with every beat of my heart
its slowing sinking in

you're not here anymore
and never can be..
i don't want to
but i am
and i wish i didn't have to
but i am
i am ...finally over you.

Copyright © truthhurts ... [ 2005-07-30 16:34:17]
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Re: I'm over you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 06:27:32 PM AEST
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I am glad you have come to an understanding within your own heart..

The one heart that dies, seems to be our own..at times, when we trace across another dead heart..

It feels like the end... as if one heart of another souly beats and lives for ours..

Keep your heart alive.. live on.. let the living hearts live on with yours..

Very explosive write here.. ty for posting..

Raquel Leah (Poetress

Re: I'm over you (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:09:01 AM AEST
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wow wow oh this was really good for a first time you rock the world girl
good luck with all your other poems

Re: I'm over you (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 04:12:58 PM AEST
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it definitely gets easier as time goes by. i think this is a really good poem, very truthful. i hope you keep writing. just think... when you are not with anyone, love could be just around the corner.....

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