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Array ( [sid] => 102316 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Collapsed, Cadaver [time] => 2005-07-30 15:48:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>


Once again I am very dark.
My eyes are unidirectional to the floor.


All these hands are on my skin
very sexy very perverted and very hard
very long claws of penetration like last time…
and i haven’t any choice


Will you come and finish me?
and rape me like father’s *****-toy?
Will you disregard my futile cries for humanity?
(Y
ou will not stop and you will continue)

To desecrate me until my bones are shards
or brilliant light and
my flesh is as hamburger and strings

like a puppet you will parade me, my limp gesticulations
My lips will lick white like yours and I am no longer my own:

drone like Men and Masses


YOU HAVE ME AND I WILL COME
my eyes are filmed like
clouds and cataracts


No heaven any longer
and your touch
only ever loved
on camera very close

only to hear your moans,
your whimpers
gasps and tears and wrongful violations,

rocking like my grandmother’s chair
and her body and wet
like synthetic stimulations
i’ve collapsed, cadaver.








ahhhhhhhhh…
(so refreshing)


I have been born anew
I am like God and my body is perfect
my rippling muscles and hands in your hair
show no room for human error
and i will have you all night if i have to…


I have been born anew, my soul is dead
like my heart and like my head
and so shall be you as i cut you

gashes of pink and holes
where my fingers are and other things
will force and tear

(( i hear your moans))
(( your whimpers))
{{gasps and tears and wrongful violations}}


I am perfect.
I have been born anew.
I am like Satan and

I am to your misfortune.
















…and mine like everyone else, my dear,
A drone like men and masses.




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Collapsed, Cadaver

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:48:29 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished






Once again I am very dark.
My eyes are unidirectional to the floor.


All these hands are on my skin
very sexy very perverted and very hard
very long claws of penetration like last time…
and i haven’t any choice


Will you come and finish me?
and rape me like father’s *****-toy?
Will you disregard my futile cries for humanity?
(Y
ou will not stop and you will continue)

To desecrate me until my bones are shards
or brilliant light and
my flesh is as hamburger and strings

like a puppet you will parade me, my limp gesticulations
My lips will lick white like yours and I am no longer my own:

drone like Men and Masses


YOU HAVE ME AND I WILL COME
my eyes are filmed like
clouds and cataracts


No heaven any longer
and your touch
only ever loved
on camera very close

only to hear your moans,
your whimpers
gasps and tears and wrongful violations,

rocking like my grandmother’s chair
and her body and wet
like synthetic stimulations
i’ve collapsed, cadaver.








ahhhhhhhhh…
(so refreshing)


I have been born anew
I am like God and my body is perfect
my rippling muscles and hands in your hair
show no room for human error
and i will have you all night if i have to…


I have been born anew, my soul is dead
like my heart and like my head
and so shall be you as i cut you

gashes of pink and holes
where my fingers are and other things
will force and tear

(( i hear your moans))
(( your whimpers))
{{gasps and tears and wrongful violations}}


I am perfect.
I have been born anew.
I am like Satan and

I am to your misfortune.
















…and mine like everyone else, my dear,
A drone like men and masses.








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Re: Collapsed, Cadaver (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:10:48 AM AEST
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great poem my friend slightly disturbing, but
nothing is wrong with that at all. Keep up the
writing and don't let the lack of comments get
you down as you are an amazing poet. I loved
it all and I want to make love... to it all.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Collapsed, Cadaver (User Rating: 1 )
by Erualaitalmarea on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 04:41:27 PM AEST
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I'm sorry for commenting... your poems are always so captivating, keep writing Lane, never stop...this is the last you'll hear from me unless you decide otherwise, I promise.




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