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Array ( [sid] => 102292 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stubborn [time] => 2005-07-30 02:51:42 [hometext] => Make sure they always know what they mean to you... [bodytext] => I will stare down the sun ‘til I go blind
I will walk this earth, let my feet undo
I will best these mountains at their game of patience
Just to prove my point to you

I will shout ‘til it fills these walls
I will rebuild a spider’s web as good as new
I will bear the boxer’s blows
Just to prove my point to you

I will write ‘til even Shakespeare is weary
I will find twin snowflakes two
I will force monuments to cower
Just to prove my point to you

I will float the river Nile
I will make the stars align on cue
If just for one single moment
You realize how much that I love you [comments] => 8 [counter] => 546 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Benny14 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Stubborn

Contributed by Benny14 on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:51:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I will stare down the sun ‘til I go blind
I will walk this earth, let my feet undo
I will best these mountains at their game of patience
Just to prove my point to you

I will shout ‘til it fills these walls
I will rebuild a spider’s web as good as new
I will bear the boxer’s blows
Just to prove my point to you

I will write ‘til even Shakespeare is weary
I will find twin snowflakes two
I will force monuments to cower
Just to prove my point to you

I will float the river Nile
I will make the stars align on cue
If just for one single moment
You realize how much that I love you

Copyright Â© Benny14 ... [ 2005-07-30 02:51:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Stubborn (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:36:37 AM AEST
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this is beautiful and straight from the right.dont give up,shes very lucky for this and she will relaize it!well,good write.i understand how u feel.t/c.
love always,
andrea

Re: Stubborn (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:49:38 AM AEST
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I will find twin snowflakes two

did you mean the "two" 'cause normally it would be too..
but I love that line..it's a gem!!!

Re: Stubborn (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:27:18 AM AEST
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This is so sweet... I think if they read this they'd realize how much they meant to you

Great poem

Love ya,
~Kiela~

Re: Stubborn (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:45:12 AM AEST
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This poem is perfection! I love it so much, I read it three times. It flows well, also.
Dusty

Re: Stubborn (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:58:46 AM AEST
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pretty good

Re: Stubborn (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 05:11:37 PM AEST
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cute poem, like it alot!

Re: Stubborn (User Rating: 1 )
by bethie on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:34:01 AM AEST
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What determination! This is very touching and admirable message.

Re: Stubborn (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 06:17:58 AM AEST
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wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooWWWWWWWWWW!
for a minite I thought it was a duplicated write but I think? the last line on the otther stubborn said but I will wait for you????
not sure but still reding.
smiles,
emy

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