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Array ( [sid] => 102288 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love At Last [time] => 2005-07-30 02:17:41 [hometext] => Something I wrote towards the end of June...now I'm ready to share it. Enjoy, and comments are welcomed. [bodytext] => Just when I think I know your every move
You come and surprise me with something new
I didn’t know how affectionate you could be
I know I haven’t seen all there is to see

I know we’ll argue what couple doesn’t
In a healthy relationship it’s a key component
We’ll laugh, we’ll cry, and love, and dance
But most importantly we’ll take the chance

We both can’t wait to see each other
And I don’t want you to love another
I want to spend my life with you
Growing old until one hundred and two

Raising our kids in a house of our own
That’s what I think about when I smell your cologne
You’re playing with our son while I’m washing the dishes
Thanking the man above for granting my wishes

You put the kids to sleep while I slip into a teddy
Then you come join me cuz we’re hot and heavy
Time flies by because we have so much fun
And before you know it we’re all done
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Love At Last

Contributed by o7neves on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:17:41 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Just when I think I know your every move
You come and surprise me with something new
I didn’t know how affectionate you could be
I know I haven’t seen all there is to see

I know we’ll argue what couple doesn’t
In a healthy relationship it’s a key component
We’ll laugh, we’ll cry, and love, and dance
But most importantly we’ll take the chance

We both can’t wait to see each other
And I don’t want you to love another
I want to spend my life with you
Growing old until one hundred and two

Raising our kids in a house of our own
That’s what I think about when I smell your cologne
You’re playing with our son while I’m washing the dishes
Thanking the man above for granting my wishes

You put the kids to sleep while I slip into a teddy
Then you come join me cuz we’re hot and heavy
Time flies by because we have so much fun
And before you know it we’re all done




Copyright © o7neves ... [ 2005-07-30 02:17:41]
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Re: Love At Last (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:50:48 AM AEST
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lol awwwwww
good write.i dont know what else to say lol


Re: Love At Last (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:53:27 AM AEST
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We’ll laugh, we’ll cry, and love, and dance
But most importantly we’ll take the chance

should be lyrics ....great!!!


Re: Love At Last (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:37:11 AM AEST
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That's beautiful... I hope they know what they mean to you

wonderful poem

love ya,
~Kiela~


Re: Love At Last (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:24:24 AM AEST
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Love, it's a wonderful thing.Lovely, heartwarming write, Ros


Re: Love At Last (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:58:47 PM AEST
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i loved it..i got such a nice picture in my mind when you were describing the family you see yourself having, you will definitely be a wonderful mother someday. Great job once again, keep em comin


Re: Love At Last (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:34:12 AM AEST
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Aww I love this poem! Its cute and towards then end Its funny. This is a really Great Write!!
I really enjoyed this part...


I know we’ll argue what couple doesn’t
In a healthy relationship it’s a key component
We’ll laugh, we’ll cry, and love, and dance
But most importantly we’ll take the chance





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