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Where will you go from here?
My Lost boy in NeverLand
Do you live in fear?

Fear of never leaving, or taking life too slow
I always had that feeling, but now I really know

You chase your long lost shadow all throughout the night
And you follow the twinkling stars to your left instead of right

When will you ever learn that you can't be Peter Pan?

Because whenever Captain Hook got close
Peter never ran

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Peter Never Ran

Contributed by LolaWhite on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:41:52 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

Silly boy in NeverLand
Where will you go from here?
My Lost boy in NeverLand
Do you live in fear?

Fear of never leaving, or taking life too slow
I always had that feeling, but now I really know

You chase your long lost shadow all throughout the night
And you follow the twinkling stars to your left instead of right

When will you ever learn that you can't be Peter Pan?

Because whenever Captain Hook got close
Peter never ran

Copyright © LolaWhite ... [ 2005-07-30 01:41:52]
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Re: Peter Never Ran (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:14:59 PM AEST
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What a lovely rendition of a tale of life in an imaginary world simply stunning a beautiful peice of poetry . . .

Ben

Re: Peter Never Ran (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 05:13:41 PM AEST
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beautiful words. sounds a bit like my little brother.

Re: Peter Never Ran (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 05:30:44 PM AEST
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Hello Lola:

I like this write very much..

It would be awful to be lost.. now that is fearful..

For some reason your write made me think of this one site I found not long ago..

http://www.pixyland.org/peterpan/

Two verses I liked under the title of that page

They go like this..

"Unless you become as little Children, you can't see God's kingdom." --Jesus

"All you need is faith and trust... and a little bit of pixie dust!" --Peter Pan

Yes, without Jesus and Peter Pan.. we are lost..

Thank very much for posting this write..

RLPoetress ; ))

Re: Peter Never Ran (User Rating: 1 )
by Monkeybones99 on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 12:33:18 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem very much....I was lost not to long ago but I have now found my way back......Thank you.

Re: Peter Never Ran (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:10:21 AM AEST
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That was really cool! I loved it because of the cute connection to
Peter Pan, I love those old tales! Nice job on this, I loved it.

~Kara

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