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Array ( [sid] => 102280 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => desolence unending [time] => 2005-07-29 23:18:33 [hometext] => I had wrote this poem like 3 years ago, and its always stuck with me i really like it and i hope you all enjoy it as well [bodytext] => harder we try
the further we fall
searching for a path
down this long winding road
through out this destiny
were bound to find
these obsticals we meet
and the sun that shines
the deeper we fall
the colder it gets
but any colder
and this love will never fix
remember my love
i will never fall astray
if we fall apart
then just look my way
reach for my hand
as i would yours
but hold on tight
i wont lose you this time [comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 55 [informant] => cooley1818 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
desolence unending

Contributed by cooley1818 on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:18:33 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



harder we try
the further we fall
searching for a path
down this long winding road
through out this destiny
were bound to find
these obsticals we meet
and the sun that shines
the deeper we fall
the colder it gets
but any colder
and this love will never fix
remember my love
i will never fall astray
if we fall apart
then just look my way
reach for my hand
as i would yours
but hold on tight
i wont lose you this time




Copyright © cooley1818 ... [ 2005-07-29 23:18:33]
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Re: desolence unending (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:40:31 AM AEST
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but hold on tight
i wont lose you this time

simply lines to rejoice over...


Re: desolence unending (User Rating: 1 )
by Somnium on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 02:54:17 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem,

"through out this destiny
were bound to find
these obsticals we meet
and the sun that shines"

Fantasic lines, nice way of talking about the obstacles in a positive way and giving the beautiful contrast of the sun that shines. Also lines to rejoice over!

Ben


Re: desolence unending (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 01:59:04 AM AEST
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Luved it




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