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Blooms cool thought and gentle reminders
Hissing of fires and burning embers, lovers
Caught off guard in memories sweet refrain
Lungs fill with air remember you were hurt

Still pictures flutter against closed eyes, I can’t decide
Blue veins fight the sun for surrender
Cradled against your heart, it was pounding
Wishes burn and some people never learn
When it all comes down there’s no place to hide

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Last of the Fury

Contributed by merry on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 06:53:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Inside the cool palace of a mind, still desert
Blooms cool thought and gentle reminders
Hissing of fires and burning embers, lovers
Caught off guard in memories sweet refrain
Lungs fill with air remember you were hurt

Still pictures flutter against closed eyes, I can’t decide
Blue veins fight the sun for surrender
Cradled against your heart, it was pounding
Wishes burn and some people never learn
When it all comes down there’s no place to hide

Copyright Â© merry ... [ 2005-07-29 18:53:26]
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Re: Last of the Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 09:50:50 PM AEST
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Every time I read your work I think about how magical your mind is. This is just another in a long line of fantastic writes that flow from your pen.

Very Very well done
Roses for my daisy
Larry

Re: Last of the Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by je2ica3 on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:36:06 PM AEST
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awsome write

Re: Last of the Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:25:43 PM AEST
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Wow... that's all I can say really... I'm speechless...

Great poem

Love ya,
~Kiela~

Re: Last of the Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:25:57 AM AEST
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Beautiful words, all of these. These emotions are described with fire and excellence, my friend. Well done.

Andrew

Re: Last of the Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 08:09:30 AM AEST
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Nice write Merry

Whisper

Re: Last of the Fury (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:49:39 AM AEST
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your verses leave a want for you to write even more of them. i suppose ill just have to be content rereading these over and over.

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