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She's always loved her
With a honey gold complexion
How she longed to cradle those curves
Maybe even slide her fingers over just the right spot
Oh, the melodic moan would fill her soul
All the souls of others within earshot would gasp
But she could only gaze from afar
Admiring each sigh
A sigh always uttered while she lay at the hands of another lover
Her envy burned into heart-ache
Tears welled up in secret in mentioning her
Still she flocked with all the others for a glance at some lover's luck
The love never dies
Such a death is impossible
For although she'll always be near her
No, she cannot play guitar [comments] => 7 [counter] => 282 [topic] => 43 [informant] => liquidsunshine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Unrequited Love

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 02:37:52 PM in AEST
Topic: oops




She's always loved her
With a honey gold complexion
How she longed to cradle those curves
Maybe even slide her fingers over just the right spot
Oh, the melodic moan would fill her soul
All the souls of others within earshot would gasp
But she could only gaze from afar
Admiring each sigh
A sigh always uttered while she lay at the hands of another lover
Her envy burned into heart-ache
Tears welled up in secret in mentioning her
Still she flocked with all the others for a glance at some lover's luck
The love never dies
Such a death is impossible
For although she'll always be near her
No, she cannot play guitar




Copyright © liquidsunshine ... [ 2005-07-29 14:37:52]
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Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 05:31:18 PM AEST
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You had me hook, line and sinker till the very last line. I was aghast, to say the least. Then on the last line I exhaled and nearly choked laughing. This is just too funny.

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Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by je2ica3 on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:46:12 PM AEST
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good write


Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by HOPE4ME2 on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:09:12 AM AEST
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I agree with MorningDove, this was awesome, you had my mind giong for sure. You know, don't think I would change a thing.

Blessings
HOPE4ME2


Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:26:36 AM AEST
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This was so different.Very enjoyable, Ros


Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:54:04 AM AEST
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Oh I love this! So tongue-in-cheek...I really wouldn't change a thing. I think this is great. Your expression was creative to say the least, and I enjoy a well-written poem with a wonderful twist at the end, such as what you've done so poetically here! Glad to see you're inspired to write once again: )
Keep 'em coming!!

Scorp.


Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:11:23 AM AEST
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Yes indeed. I also join the many that fell into a trap well set. You had me until the word before last. Well done.
Take care, and hope, for you (?) may sometime learn guitar. On second thought, if it wasn´t about you, and you showed it to who it really was about....
Well, anyhow, take care.
David


Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 04:11:34 AM AEST
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Yeah, you totally had me...I was like, Chelsea!!!...but that made me laugh all the harder in the end. You're a crack up, kid.
~Carrie~




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