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Array ( [sid] => 102218 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sky View Cabin [time] => 2005-07-28 20:59:40 [hometext] => This poem depicts our beautiful vacation setting, which became the inspiration for my poem titled [bodytext] => A quaint rustic cabin
Nestled in among the trees
A refuge to escape the drudgeries
Of everyday routine

Over looking the lake, atop the bluff
Surrounded by a forest of diversified trees
A tapestry of mixed sizes and shapes
Providing ia picturesque panoramic escape

A hushed serenity surrounded the place
Where nature and spirit combined
Creating an atmosphere of the sublime
Awesome setting for this wonderful rendezvous

A privilege to experience this amazing location
Where blue sky and sparkling water joined
Nature providing a mirror to reflect its' beauty
Majestic towering pine, a landmark of the divine

I attempt to integrate it all
A deep sense of humility erupts within
I thank God for His beauty before me
A deep experience of peace and tranquility [comments] => 5 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 19 [informant] => Willofree [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Sky View Cabin

Contributed by Willofree on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 08:59:40 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

A quaint rustic cabin
Nestled in among the trees
A refuge to escape the drudgeries
Of everyday routine

Over looking the lake, atop the bluff
Surrounded by a forest of diversified trees
A tapestry of mixed sizes and shapes
Providing ia picturesque panoramic escape

A hushed serenity surrounded the place
Where nature and spirit combined
Creating an atmosphere of the sublime
Awesome setting for this wonderful rendezvous

A privilege to experience this amazing location
Where blue sky and sparkling water joined
Nature providing a mirror to reflect its' beauty
Majestic towering pine, a landmark of the divine

I attempt to integrate it all
A deep sense of humility erupts within
I thank God for His beauty before me
A deep experience of peace and tranquility

Copyright © Willofree ... [ 2005-07-28 20:59:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sky View Cabin (User Rating: 1 )
by LORI on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 09:03:25 PM AEST
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Sounds relaxing. Thank you for sharing your vacation.

Re: Sky View Cabin (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 03:21:33 AM AEST
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This is so lovely. I used to have a cabin in Colorado that looked down on a beautiful lake and there was a snow-capped mountain on the other side of the lake. Beautiful trees all around. With binoculars you could see the wild animals on the mountain side. Peace and tranquility is a perfect description. Your imagery is very very good.

Rita

Re: Sky View Cabin (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 05:10:57 AM AEST
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Wonderful imagery in this piece Will...fantastic...you took me there with you as I read along. Sounds very peaceful...Well done on this write, it had a relaxed flow which coincided nicely with the nature of this poem. (No pun intended...lol)

Scorp: )

Re: Sky View Cabin (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 02:10:10 PM AEST
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A wonderfully beautifully expressive poem, I absolutely loved it, I loved the ending it seemed to top it all off, a very good write, beautifull. SLipSiX.

Re: Sky View Cabin (User Rating: 1 )
by mom11159 on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 11:59:54 AM AEST
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ahhhhhhh sounds so very serene. I loved every word of this wonderful and beautiful poem such excellent imagery in this and your words so very very captivating could just see this amazing place and feel the peace and tranquility. Beautiful just breathtaking
Cathy

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