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A girl who has lost her way
‘I love you’
Are the simple words she was longing for someone to say

But no one did
Because they didn’t care
‘I hate you’
Are the brutal words that she couldn’t bare

Even though it hurt
Those words she couldn’t bare
Would get stuck in her head
And would just stay there

She never heard words of
Passion, caring, or affection
But words of
Hurt, pain, and rejection

No one ever loved her
Or helped her with her pain
So, gradually as she grew
She was considered insane

Until, finally she realized
She didn’t deserve to live this life
So she turned to her best friend
Silver, her knife

She laid down her knife
Upon her wrist on a vein
She did one deep, long slice
And the last thing she felt was pain
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Words

Contributed by Misunderstood_gurl on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 08:04:20 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

She was just a girl
A girl who has lost her way
‘I love you’
Are the simple words she was longing for someone to say

But no one did
Because they didn’t care
‘I hate you’
Are the brutal words that she couldn’t bare

Even though it hurt
Those words she couldn’t bare
Would get stuck in her head
And would just stay there

She never heard words of
Passion, caring, or affection
But words of
Hurt, pain, and rejection

No one ever loved her
Or helped her with her pain
So, gradually as she grew
She was considered insane

Until, finally she realized
She didn’t deserve to live this life
So she turned to her best friend
Silver, her knife

She laid down her knife
Upon her wrist on a vein
She did one deep, long slice
And the last thing she felt was pain

Copyright Â© Misunderstood_gurl ... [ 2005-07-28 20:04:20]
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Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 02:12:19 PM AEST
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I liked this poem, it was very emotional, sometimes hate can be one of the strongest words in the world, usually people say it out of anger, sometimes they do not mean it. SLipSiX.

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by AnaBanana on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:33:58 PM AEST
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aww thats sad...

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:33:36 PM AEST
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good, sad, and powerful write. good job, and if 'she' is really 'you' please, don't do it. i know the pain of rejection and hurt and not of love and care. and i'm still living... please don't hurt yourself. it's not worth it. we have to stick together... good write, though. keep up the good work!

~sprints

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Kamal on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 11:14:48 AM AEST
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Hey you
That was deep I really like the way you worded your write.. at the end I knew what was going to happen but its your wordiness I like...

Please continue....

She laid down her knife
Upon her wrist on a vein
She did one deep, long slice
And the last thing she felt was pain

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