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As you let the water pour down on me
I still burn bright for I defy forces of nature
And while continue to try you will find
That as it may appear me to be fading
I will smother your drops with smoke
And I will begin to smolder but
To your surprise die I will not
I shall keep burning bright
Whilst you drizzle dumbfounded
For you have tried everything but
To your greatest amazement burn on
I do, and with all your strength
You try and try and then
I am gone, leaving traces
Of horrific evidence for I made
My mark and I am satisfied
For now you see teardrops
Cannot erase the pain it just
Eases it, but the essential
Emotion remains and always will

tori [comments] => 4 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 43 [informant] => fireispassion [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Let It Enfold You

Contributed by fireispassion on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:21:59 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Let It Enfold You

As you let the water pour down on me
I still burn bright for I defy forces of nature
And while continue to try you will find
That as it may appear me to be fading
I will smother your drops with smoke
And I will begin to smolder but
To your surprise die I will not
I shall keep burning bright
Whilst you drizzle dumbfounded
For you have tried everything but
To your greatest amazement burn on
I do, and with all your strength
You try and try and then
I am gone, leaving traces
Of horrific evidence for I made
My mark and I am satisfied
For now you see teardrops
Cannot erase the pain it just
Eases it, but the essential
Emotion remains and always will

tori

Copyright © fireispassion ... [ 2005-07-28 13:21:59]
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Re: Let It Enfold You (User Rating: 1 )
by TeenageDirtbag on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:59:29 PM AEST
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Nice ^ ^ It reminds me of a lyric from a song by The Used.

It's our time to shine through the depths, glorified by what is ours.

Or at least that's what I think it is ~.^

Re: Let It Enfold You (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:55:18 PM AEST
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That's beautiful... *smiles* it's so emotional yet tranquil but still very saddening... wonderfully written

Love ya,
~Kiela~

Re: Let It Enfold You (User Rating: 1 )
by HOPE4ME2 on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:14:45 AM AEST
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Loved your poem, sort of had me riding a wave of solitude, very touching, but at the same time it was bold.

Blessings
HOPE4ME2

Re: Let It Enfold You (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 12:53:39 AM AEST
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awesome...i loved it...sad...but good...keep up the gr8 work!

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