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[aid] => mick
[title] => My Second Last Goodbye
[time] => 2005-07-27 23:51:44
[hometext] =>
[bodytext] => i look at the scars on my wrist.
i remeber the night i was thinking of him.
it wasn't worth it i say to myself
but somewhere inside i'm still screaming for help.
i say that i have all of that behind
but now i just hide the tears i cry.
if they knew they would only assume
like they did that afternoon.
they pushed me down onto that couch
and waited for the truth to come bursting out.
out it came but not every line
only enough to get them to cry.
they think i'm crazy i know they do
but they will never tell the truth.
so once more i type these words
as i prepare to lave this world.
if i slice just once will all the pain be gone
or will i be stuck with more
than i have had for so long.
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[topicname] => Suicide
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My Second Last Goodbye
Contributed by
needs_change
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Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:51:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i look at the scars on my wrist.
i remeber the night i was thinking of him.
it wasn't worth it i say to myself
but somewhere inside i'm still screaming for help.
i say that i have all of that behind
but now i just hide the tears i cry.
if they knew they would only assume
like they did that afternoon.
they pushed me down onto that couch
and waited for the truth to come bursting out.
out it came but not every line
only enough to get them to cry.
they think i'm crazy i know they do
but they will never tell the truth.
so once more i type these words
as i prepare to lave this world.
if i slice just once will all the pain be gone
or will i be stuck with more
than i have had for so long.
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needs_change
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2005-07-27 23:51:44]
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Re: My Second Last Goodbye
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by russ-dawg on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 12:21:33 AM AEST
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| i know how you feel i have been there i worked it out i am not sure how but the thought gets real friendly everyonce in a while but it behinde me good write i could really feel what you were saying! |
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Re: My Second Last Goodbye
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:22:46 AM AEST
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Very sad but well said.
These writes jus break my heart.
I do hope this is jus writing.
huggs, prayers,
emy |
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Re: My Second Last Goodbye
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 08:15:39 AM AEST
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there's alot of raw emotions in here.
i don't know what to say... i tried to kill my-self, the day before yesterday, and they want put me back into a mental-health unit asap!
so i feel your pain but don't know quite how to answer to this... i don't want you to end up down my route, but when i was in your shoes, i know, i couldn't stand it either.
PM me if you wanna chat, if not, try to get some decent help, before it's all too late! |
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Re: My Second Last Goodbye
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by Beni on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:43:27 PM AEST
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I also know how you feel as i have been and kind of am in this position. Your poem shows the extent to which people go to when life gets rough.
Hang on in there. Great poem.
Love Bex
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Re: My Second Last Goodbye
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by Naughtygurl on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:00:14 AM AEST
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Ok thats really deppresing are you really this upset.. I barely know you but your poems really are great , and i love reading them They kinda remind me of my past and how i can still be. But life gets better i swear this to you.. I'll always b here to talk ... Please just if you really feel like this make sure you think things threw , i know you will find there are more then one reasons to live for...
~~Britt |
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Re: My Second Last Goodbye
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by guiltycircles on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 04:54:36 AM AEST
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| awesome write... captured the emotions of getting ready... i know the feeling and i know how it feels to hide it... but with talent like this, i wont let you die |
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Re: My Second Last Goodbye
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by hearts4pain on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:12:10 PM AEST
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i ***** love this poem. holy *****. it just expresses the right then and there moment. i havent done it for some time now. i do it when im EXTREMELY depressed like when something reallllly bad happens. but ive never gotten to the habbit of doing it all the time. but i definately think about it alll the time. but i know what u feeling and this poem is just amazing. im listening to the bled at the moment while i read this poem. it kinda added anger to it when i read it. but yea. dont ya just wanna cut all that anger?!?!?! baaaaaah. great poem. great poemt. IM me sometime. j is for weener
- janine |
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