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You think just like I do
but that didnt seem to matter.

No more good times
No more me walking into a room of people
with nothing but a blanket on.
Just me sitting in my chair
writing another stupid poem
about my broken heart.

All I want now is for you to come back home
You dont have to date me,
though it would make me smile alot more.
I just want to see you smile
see you laugh.
I just want to have more good times with you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 48 [informant] => creed [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 41 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Fading Memories

Contributed by creed on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:10:04 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

We're not so different
You think just like I do
but that didnt seem to matter.

No more good times
No more me walking into a room of people
with nothing but a blanket on.
Just me sitting in my chair
writing another stupid poem
about my broken heart.

All I want now is for you to come back home
You dont have to date me,
though it would make me smile alot more.
I just want to see you smile
see you laugh.
I just want to have more good times with you.

Copyright © creed ... [ 2005-07-27 23:10:04]
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Re: Fading Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 06:53:09 AM AEST
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A bit sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy
u haven't lost your touch.

Re: Fading Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 12:37:21 PM AEST
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That sounded sad but hopeful for the better times.. which is a good thing. the poem was very good.

keep it up

dW

Re: Fading Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedOptomist on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 01:03:12 AM AEST
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heh heh those were some good times we'll make some more just not like that. give me time and i'll be home to try this friends thing again. cheer up blood flower it's not all bad.

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