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Array ( [sid] => 102144 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => mind is racin [time] => 2005-07-27 13:12:20 [hometext] => this is just off the top of my head ... im tying it on this page for the first time .. so its kinda like a freestyle [bodytext] => 3 o clock and my note books still blank
theres no one to thank
but im doin my own thang
writin this s*** wen eva i get the chance
and plus its betta than havin a four-five in my hands
i got some major plans be the best i can be wit out joinin the army
the governmant doesnt wanna arm me ..
ill go on a rampage ... n kill n e thing that moves
renegade part II i sed i dont listen to rules ..
now whos the fools .. not u
of course not u..
ur so perfect .... ur over 18 so wat u do has to be right
u cant do no wrong
the child mind is pure
im not doin ***** wrong
listen to this song
im so right .
turn off the light ..
cuz its not like u got good sight
ya mid is rottin wit everyday that passes
i think adults put us here to kiss there ******
YEA yall can kiss mines ... so dont get outta line cuz untill this poem is over ya attention is mine
okay well its over so u can have your thought back .. make sure i get a comment ... or ima gitchu
no one could stop ... u could have the millitary witchu [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 6 [informant] => systematiq [notes] => Edited due to the use of banned words. Please dead the site rules and at least try to honour them. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
mind is racin

Contributed by systematiq on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 01:12:20 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



3 o clock and my note books still blank
theres no one to thank
but im doin my own thang
writin this s*** wen eva i get the chance
and plus its betta than havin a four-five in my hands
i got some major plans be the best i can be wit out joinin the army
the governmant doesnt wanna arm me ..
ill go on a rampage ... n kill n e thing that moves
renegade part II i sed i dont listen to rules ..
now whos the fools .. not u
of course not u..
ur so perfect .... ur over 18 so wat u do has to be right
u cant do no wrong
the child mind is pure
im not doin ***** wrong
listen to this song
im so right .
turn off the light ..
cuz its not like u got good sight
ya mid is rottin wit everyday that passes
i think adults put us here to kiss there ******
YEA yall can kiss mines ... so dont get outta line cuz untill this poem is over ya attention is mine
okay well its over so u can have your thought back .. make sure i get a comment ... or ima gitchu
no one could stop ... u could have the millitary witchu




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Re: mind is racin (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 07:26:50 PM AEST
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lol.. ok, you had my attention. Once. lol. ty.
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Re: mind is racin (User Rating: 1 )
by etherealgurl on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 08:01:51 PM AEST
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