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it burns my back
tearing up
my scars in place

whatve i got
if none to lack
shut up!
and hide your face

evil wench
tell me another
kill the cells
destroy the mother

sacred runes
that told you nothing
but you still percieve
that they know it

hide it now you vile submission
take a hit fall to the collision
break the lies that held your mind
what now is discovered; what did you find?

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What did you find?

Contributed by hardrocker15198916 on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 12:32:30 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

scorching hot
it burns my back
tearing up
my scars in place

whatve i got
if none to lack
shut up!
and hide your face

evil wench
tell me another
kill the cells
destroy the mother

sacred runes
that told you nothing
but you still percieve
that they know it

hide it now you vile submission
take a hit fall to the collision
break the lies that held your mind
what now is discovered; what did you find?

Copyright © hardrocker15198916 ... [ 2005-07-27 12:32:30]
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Re: What did you find? (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 12:44:05 PM AEST
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wow, that was definitely edgy and full of venom... very good though. I definitely like the third stanza, i don't know why though.. it just stuck out in my mind

keep it up

dw

Re: What did you find? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 01:57:31 PM AEST
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Wow... I'd hate to get on your bad side and see this side of you... I hope whoever made you feel this way is goign through their own pain to make up for putting you through this...

All in all it was a wonderful poem

Love ya,
~Kiela~
(who knows she's written many poems where she sounded more vidictive than she'd like)

Re: What did you find? (User Rating: 1 )
by JGB on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 01:11:16 AM AEST
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She must have cheated on you. That's the one thing to call for hate like that.

good luck

Re: What did you find? (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 09:04:21 PM AEST
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Learn to forgive...Poem is great!
God Bless!
P:S: Hope to read more of your work!

Re: What did you find? (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 11:52:35 PM AEST
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I feel the anger and rage .. you really made it come through.

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