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Array ( [sid] => 102138 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broke [time] => 2005-07-27 09:55:28 [hometext] => im sure this poem can relate to some people out there who have run into backstabbers.. [bodytext] => im outta money
theres nothing left
and i dont know where it went
cant remember where i spent it
on things for you or rent

im outta love
its just not there
but i know how that got lost
for some reason i was willing
to make you happy at all cost

you broke my heart
you stole my money
what is there left to take?
that cold heart inside of you
would take my eyes out with a rake
just to get what you want
just to get what you want

now im broke broke broke broke broke
physically and mentally
lost inside my scattered thoughts
broke broke broke broke broke

outta money
theres nothing left
but i know where that went
its somewhere far away with you
and i cant pay the rent

outta love
its never gonna be there
its on you that it was lost
if you were here id tell you
you arent worth a penny of what you cost

feeling slightly better
but still wont recover ever
out of a house in bad weather
and im broke broke broke broke broke

your a
heartbreaker
money taker
lie maker
and im
broke broke bro ke br ok e b r o k e [comments] => 5 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 43 [informant] => PuppyChow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Broke

Contributed by PuppyChow on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:55:28 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

im outta money
theres nothing left
and i dont know where it went
cant remember where i spent it
on things for you or rent

im outta love
its just not there
but i know how that got lost
for some reason i was willing
to make you happy at all cost

you broke my heart
you stole my money
what is there left to take?
that cold heart inside of you
would take my eyes out with a rake
just to get what you want
just to get what you want

now im broke broke broke broke broke
physically and mentally
lost inside my scattered thoughts
broke broke broke broke broke

outta money
theres nothing left
but i know where that went
its somewhere far away with you
and i cant pay the rent

outta love
its never gonna be there
its on you that it was lost
if you were here id tell you
you arent worth a penny of what you cost

feeling slightly better
but still wont recover ever
out of a house in bad weather
and im broke broke broke broke broke

your a
heartbreaker
money taker
lie maker
and im
broke broke bro ke br ok e b r o k e

Copyright © PuppyChow ... [ 2005-07-27 09:55:28]
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Re: Broke (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 02:13:43 PM AEST
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I know this feeling all too well

You shouldn't let someone use you like that, ever... take care of your heart... because if you don't, no one else will...

Great poem, everyone can relate to it at some point or another

Love ya,
~Kiela~

Re: Broke (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 07:11:19 PM AEST
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I've been backstabbed before.. but that sounds much worse than backstabbing, i don't even think there's a word for it.

the poem was very honest and revealing
i like it a lot... so keep it up

dw

Re: Broke (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:42:13 PM AEST
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A great write if i ever saw one easy to read don't need 2 be shrink 2 dicipher it and straight from the heart, as for running into back stabers, welcome 2 ypdc, just keep writting and soon you'll see what you can
do when you don't feed the many mouths of negativity and jelliousy, whether on the net or in the real world, good luck 2u like your style and straight foward approach . . .

Ben

Re: Broke (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 06:59:44 AM AEST
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My first thoughts were if you allow another to take advantage---is it really backstabbing? I dunno...

Well, you made a very strong statement with your poem and expressed your anger and disappointment vividly.

You know this could also be lyrics, i'm thinking.

Thanks for sharing with us.

Kie

Re: Broke (User Rating: 1 )
by PuppyChow on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:17:23 PM AEST
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yeah this is another one of my bands songs....to the ones out there that know that i have one...

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