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[sid] => 102112
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Scars
[time] => 2005-07-26 19:28:19
[hometext] => scars...thy're always there
[bodytext] => These scars remind me
Of how I feel
And that the past
Will always be real
No matter how hard I try
I can’t escape from them
Even after time
The scars do dim
When I do hide them
They are still there
But looking at the
Is something I can hardly bare
These scars are
A memory of my past
Although my smile
Is always my mask
I wear my mask
Every single day
It seemed as if I was always happy
But no one knew the price I had to pay
[comments] => 10
[counter] => 167
[topic] => 36
[informant] => Misunderstood_gurl
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[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
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[ratings] => 0
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
)
Scars
Contributed by
Misunderstood_gurl
on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 07:28:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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These scars remind me
Of how I feel
And that the past
Will always be real
No matter how hard I try
I can’t escape from them
Even after time
The scars do dim
When I do hide them
They are still there
But looking at the
Is something I can hardly bare
These scars are
A memory of my past
Although my smile
Is always my mask
I wear my mask
Every single day
It seemed as if I was always happy
But no one knew the price I had to pay
Copyright ©
Misunderstood_gurl
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2005-07-26 19:28:19]
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Re: Scars
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by harlot20 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 09:19:17 PM AEST
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| i can soo relate to this poem of yours. you've expressed the pain so well. |
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Re: Scars
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:07:09 PM AEST
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| Great poem, I know how that goes i use to hurt myself everyday over a guy recovery is hard and scars fade over time but never fully go away GREAT WRITE!- Becca- |
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Re: Scars
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by kissofdeathxx on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:17:38 PM AEST
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| Good write, I can relate to it as well, and I'm sure many others can too, I used to do the same, but I've no come to realize, there's no need to really. Good job, keep up the good writes. |
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Re: Scars
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by BabyFacedAngel2010 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:01:55 PM AEST
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| Nice poem,Keep it up.As Im told.This too shall pass.Keep your head up §BabyFacedAngel§ |
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Re: Scars
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 12:39:21 AM AEST
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| i think that this could do with a bit of creativity, because this subject has been done many times, and creativity and skill are some of the only ways to have your poem more outstanding than the others. this seemed very honest, and thats good. i think you could move on to rhyme formats as well. your ending is the best in this, because it showed a bit of creativity and power, i think if you really enhanced these parts of your poetry, youll further your skills with expressing your emotions and yourself. |
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Re: Scars
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by needs_change on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:29:13 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem. very good write. i know many others have said this and many more probly will, but i can relate. life is *****ty and sometimes you do stuff to try to make it better but end up paying for it with the scars. wether they be physical or emotional. everything touches you in a different way. and everything stays with you. the good and bad. well like i said, i really really enjoyed this poem. great great write. |
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Re: Scars
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 07:42:38 AM AEST
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| I wear my scars .. don't even remember them mostly .. till they burn ... |
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Re: Scars
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:24:07 PM AEST
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awesome write, i know how you feel. because as we found out- you and i are very similar-- wearing masks everyday. it hurts- but i've got to do it. if we stick together, though, we can make it. great write, i enjoyed reading it. good job, keep it up.
~sprints |
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Re: Scars
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by guiltycircles on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 06:34:32 AM AEST
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| you've captured the feeling of looking at those awful reminders every day, but keep writing and they will remain scars and not fresh cuts |
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Re: Scars
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by Mallard8 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 02:30:50 AM AEST
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You don't really need to hear how good this poem is because you have ten comments before that tell you this, but... it was great I really enojoyed it!
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