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A shadow cast by the moon that night

The air smelled sweet of honey dew
And I spent that night wrapped up in you

Softly touched, my heart did race
A softer kiss picked up the pace

And all the world we did erase
For just that time in that special place

When at last the night was still
Quiet crept in and the darkness took fill

In with the fog came a slumber so deep
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New Lover's Sleep

Contributed by LolaWhite on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:07:56 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Glistening in the candle light
A shadow cast by the moon that night

The air smelled sweet of honey dew
And I spent that night wrapped up in you

Softly touched, my heart did race
A softer kiss picked up the pace

And all the world we did erase
For just that time in that special place

When at last the night was still
Quiet crept in and the darkness took fill

In with the fog came a slumber so deep
At long last, a night of new lover's sleep

Copyright © LolaWhite ... [ 2005-07-26 11:07:56]
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Re: New Lover's Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by seci on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:37:27 PM AEST
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i feel the way that you write is quite beautiful and respectful.
its a great thing when you are in love and when in relationships you don't have to fuss , fight and shove
you continue to write
and i will continue to look for you on the site

ALL SMILES
seci
p.s i just saying i love this poem.

Re: New Lover's Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Brandyx7 on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 02:43:21 PM AEST
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You exress your love for this person, in a very remarkable way.. Many people can't write about love, but can only feel it.. So, to capture us in this love.. And that is beautiful.

Re: New Lover's Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:37:56 PM AEST
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Loved, content and safely in your lover's arms. Yes, that is a feeling I miss so much, as I know you do too. He will be home soon, I hope, bringing that peace with him to last you forever.

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Re: New Lover's Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 03:02:58 AM AEST
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yes that is a wonderful feeling, good write

Re: New Lover's Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 03:10:14 AM AEST
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Lola your poetry is that of an old new

england village quaint and comfortable to

read, gives me a secure and homy feeling

some where i like belonging to, lovely style

you write so well a joy to read . . .

Ben

Re: New Lover's Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 09:52:14 AM AEST
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wow my love like I told you already this is a great write and I love you and thank you so much for writing it for me. I like this line here because so often this is how I feel when I'm with you.

And all the world we did erase
For just that time in that special place

great write as always my love and I miss you so much. soon we will be together again. your husband and soldier....Steve(Sride686)

Re: New Lover's Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:34:37 PM AEST
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Oh this poem is so sweet! The love that you describe so vividly in this poem is unique and i someday wish to feel it. Great Write!

~Brenna~

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