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Array ( [sid] => 102085 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My girl [time] => 2005-07-26 07:41:01 [hometext] => wrote this as a gift for my girl friend [bodytext] => I don’t write of my feelings
But I’m writing just for you
Granting your request
Like only a true love could

You’re the footprint on my heart
I know will never fade
And every moment I spend with you
Forever makes my day

And every time were together
Is a perfect moment in time
Like two comets colliding
In the most radiant sky

Now I could tell you of your beauty
But you’ve heard it all before
Besides words can’t do justice
To something so perfect and so pure

Instead I wish to write
What I now believe
The way I feel about you
Is you mean the world to me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 2 [informant] => xsitm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
My girl

Contributed by xsitm on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 07:41:01 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I don’t write of my feelings
But I’m writing just for you
Granting your request
Like only a true love could

You’re the footprint on my heart
I know will never fade
And every moment I spend with you
Forever makes my day

And every time were together
Is a perfect moment in time
Like two comets colliding
In the most radiant sky

Now I could tell you of your beauty
But you’ve heard it all before
Besides words can’t do justice
To something so perfect and so pure

Instead I wish to write
What I now believe
The way I feel about you
Is you mean the world to me




Copyright © xsitm ... [ 2005-07-26 07:41:01]
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Re: My girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Sir_Odd87 on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 08:55:56 AM AEST
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Good for you, man... Well written, and I'm glad you've found her.


Re: My girl (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:12:31 AM AEST
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This was just so sweet, good for you to find the one.

Thanks for sharing

Jane~


Re: My girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:26:53 PM AEST
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Very sweet I bet shes going to like it alot. Great write, and good luck with your girl.




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