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never truley cared for me.
Just the thought of keeping me
was pain within its self.
But did you ever love me
I mean really love me?
I know you say the words,
but words cannot be felt.

I was out of your life
at the age of four.
Out of your heart
since before I could breath.

Now today you say you love me,
but what about the past?
You think you can enter through my life
and have the rest be left.
I dont know if I can trust you
dont know if my heart can take it.
I dont know if I can love you
Dont know if my heart will make it. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Shattered_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Unwanted

Contributed by Shattered_soul on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 03:22:59 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I know you never wanted me
never truley cared for me.
Just the thought of keeping me
was pain within its self.
But did you ever love me
I mean really love me?
I know you say the words,
but words cannot be felt.

I was out of your life
at the age of four.
Out of your heart
since before I could breath.

Now today you say you love me,
but what about the past?
You think you can enter through my life
and have the rest be left.
I dont know if I can trust you
dont know if my heart can take it.
I dont know if I can love you
Dont know if my heart will make it.

Copyright © Shattered_soul ... [ 2005-07-26 03:22:59]
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Re: Unwanted (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 04:31:37 AM AEST
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lovely poem and sad i hope this isnt a true life thing i experienced that once to it hurts

Re: Unwanted (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:38:53 PM AEST
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wow, it was very sad but, it was soo very honest. that's what good poetry is all about.. honesty.

thanks for sharing.. and keep your head high

dw

Re: Unwanted (User Rating: 1 )
by visualizing_life on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 05:28:57 PM AEST
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your were write that was a sad poem...and i hate to say it but...its a part of life...feeling unloved...being left.... tricked...everything...i know i go through it with everybody...but somebody is out there and they will love you and feel the words they say....hold onto them when you find em...they dont come by everyday... hopeless

Re: Unwanted (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:59:26 PM AEST
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sad but very good on expressing how you feal. -Becka-

Re: Unwanted (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 09:05:09 AM AEST
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Very well written. I think you did a great job on this.
The rhyme and the flow are well done.
As to the content... Well, I beleive that everyone deserves a chance. You may not really know what that person..(parent?) was going through at the time they left. I'm not making excuses for them, all I'm saying there are two sides to every story (at least!)
It's a terrible thing to feel unwanted. I hope things change for you, Some people never change, but sometimes...

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