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Array ( [sid] => 102075 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heaven-Sent [time] => 2005-07-26 01:45:15 [hometext] => ~to the two most important men in my life, you know who you are ;-) [bodytext] => When God made you I think HE had a special plan in mind
For I had prayed some time ago for someone warm and kind
God HE knew my heart was dim from love that came and went
So HE prepared his favorite dish, a dish called "Heaven-Sent"

HE started with his image, then HE shook the evening sky
For just the right amount of stars to place into your eyes
HE stirred in lots of sunshine, for warmth within your heart
Added just a pinch of moon to glow should it grow dark

A dash of Cherub essence, for your mindset to be youthful
Cause' being a big kid at heart could prove to be quite useful
The ingredients to follow, would make this dish complete
An angels voice and hidden wings to sweep me off my feet

God, when all was finished, delivered you to me
Wrapped in, a blanket of His love, for all eternity
Reflecting on that special day, I know now what God meant
You are the sun, the moon, the stars...my angel...my "Heaven-Sent"



Copyright © CB 2005

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Heaven-Sent

Contributed by CarolinaBlue on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 01:45:15 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



When God made you I think HE had a special plan in mind
For I had prayed some time ago for someone warm and kind
God HE knew my heart was dim from love that came and went
So HE prepared his favorite dish, a dish called "Heaven-Sent"

HE started with his image, then HE shook the evening sky
For just the right amount of stars to place into your eyes
HE stirred in lots of sunshine, for warmth within your heart
Added just a pinch of moon to glow should it grow dark

A dash of Cherub essence, for your mindset to be youthful
Cause' being a big kid at heart could prove to be quite useful
The ingredients to follow, would make this dish complete
An angels voice and hidden wings to sweep me off my feet

God, when all was finished, delivered you to me
Wrapped in, a blanket of His love, for all eternity
Reflecting on that special day, I know now what God meant
You are the sun, the moon, the stars...my angel...my "Heaven-Sent"



Copyright © CB 2005





Copyright © CarolinaBlue ... [ 2005-07-26 01:45:15]
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Re: Heaven-Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 01:55:18 AM AEST
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interesting this is


Re: Heaven-Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 01:59:54 AM AEST
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Beautifull.
huggs,
emy


Re: Heaven-Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 03:03:41 AM AEST
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beautiful feelings and pouring out of emotions, so lovely this poetic work of art . . .

Ben


Re: Heaven-Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 04:39:11 AM AEST
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great write very powerful


Re: Heaven-Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:09:45 PM AEST
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Awww how beautiful and sweet...this had a good flow and some creative rhyming to go with your loving words. Nicely done!!


Scorp.


Re: Heaven-Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:23:40 PM AEST
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Awww Blue, this is beautiful and so refreshing.... Loved it. Good for you..
Jenni


Re: Heaven-Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:32:37 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful, blue. rare it is that we meet someone that makes us feel this way. you are lucky to know someone or two someones like this. this is a really sweet poem.




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