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Array ( [sid] => 102072 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2005-07-26 00:31:36 [hometext] => I was really angry while writing this. But I worked it out with the certain person and we are ok now. [bodytext] => You promised you wouldn't forget
I guess you lied the last time we met
You let me go and turned your back
The truth in lies is what you lack

You made me believe in who you are
You made me whole and healed my scars
I was blinded, I didn't know you were fake
Falling in love was my biggest mistake

You used me
Screwed and abused me
You took advantage of my love
I just wasn't good enough

I was nothing but a good lay
Just someone to screw and throw away
You looked the part and played your role
My virginity and heart you stole

I didn't matter, you didn't care
You weren't really going to be there
I was just some toy for your pleasure
But to me you were my only treasure

I hope you regret not having the love that was yours
Die inside and live a life of remorse
Lose all sence of hope
And never find a way to cope

You lost the only good thing in your life
I hope you live with pain and strife
I wish you miss what you lack
But I'm gone now and never coming back

It's too late to change your mind
How could you be so ***** blind
I hope you die alone and sad
And think back at what you could of had

I'm gone, it's much too late
You wont be happy with your turn of fate
It is you I want this to happen to
So I can't understand why I'm still in love with you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 6 [informant] => bluoreo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Untitled

Contributed by bluoreo on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:31:36 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



You promised you wouldn't forget
I guess you lied the last time we met
You let me go and turned your back
The truth in lies is what you lack

You made me believe in who you are
You made me whole and healed my scars
I was blinded, I didn't know you were fake
Falling in love was my biggest mistake

You used me
Screwed and abused me
You took advantage of my love
I just wasn't good enough

I was nothing but a good lay
Just someone to screw and throw away
You looked the part and played your role
My virginity and heart you stole

I didn't matter, you didn't care
You weren't really going to be there
I was just some toy for your pleasure
But to me you were my only treasure

I hope you regret not having the love that was yours
Die inside and live a life of remorse
Lose all sence of hope
And never find a way to cope

You lost the only good thing in your life
I hope you live with pain and strife
I wish you miss what you lack
But I'm gone now and never coming back

It's too late to change your mind
How could you be so ***** blind
I hope you die alone and sad
And think back at what you could of had

I'm gone, it's much too late
You wont be happy with your turn of fate
It is you I want this to happen to
So I can't understand why I'm still in love with you




Copyright © bluoreo ... [ 2005-07-26 00:31:36]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 01:08:14 AM AEST
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Awesome... i absolutely love when i can feel the emotion that is put in a piece such as this... you did a wonderful job of putting your anger and frustration in your words... it came out beautifully!!!

- poet


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Randyjohnson on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 09:38:22 AM AEST
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I'm glad that you made up with this person.




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