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nostalgic nonsense without end
ventriloquist of the heart
seize wounds of naught

babble lipped and tainted with love
thoughts of you i cannot fend
temptress of mind
obsessions of you shall cause my end

heathen of my heart
misleader of my mind
i heed your words of simple seduction
and to your evils i am blind
i can resist all but you......simple temptation [comments] => 6 [counter] => 497 [topic] => 43 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

temptation

Contributed by socialmisfit on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 02:17:02 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

killing time without a thought
nostalgic nonsense without end
ventriloquist of the heart
seize wounds of naught

babble lipped and tainted with love
thoughts of you i cannot fend
temptress of mind
obsessions of you shall cause my end

heathen of my heart
misleader of my mind
i heed your words of simple seduction
and to your evils i am blind
i can resist all but you......simple temptation

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Re: temptation (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:15:26 AM AEST
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I like the flow and simple but illustrative style. Simple eloquence is hard to find, but you've hit on a vein here. Good work.

Andrew

Re: temptation (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:32:55 AM AEST
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I agree that it flows very well indeed.great write.

Re: temptation (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:11:32 PM AEST
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Well I see you've outdone yourself again: )
Wonderful expression in this piece, and a few very good lines...some darkish undertones to this write. I love the last stanza! Very good. Keep it up!!

Scorp.

Re: temptation (User Rating: 1 )
by seci on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 04:57:40 PM AEST
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quite simple but i really like it. your words are very different, mainly i like the grammer i suppose, keep writing. i would love to learn and read more about you in your poems

Re: temptation (User Rating: 1 )
by seci on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 04:58:11 PM AEST
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quite simple but i really like it. your words are very different, mainly i like the grammer i suppose, keep writing. i would love to learn and read more about you in your poems

Re: temptation (User Rating: 1 )
by edwynne on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 06:38:40 PM AEST
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i like it, simple ones r the best ones

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