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I wanted to drown my self

Where some many others have

But with my luck someone

Had gotten there before me

I had to pull her body out

Her body was cold but

She was still alive

she must have been only

For a short while

So I rescued her you can say

Her dark black hair

Covered her face So I

Moved it aside

She was very beautiful

Unnaturally fair

Almost like a doll

She would not wake up

So I just held her

So that my body would warm her

She finally opened her eyes

Then spoke and I was overwhelmed

Was there some one who wanted to die

More than I

She asked why I save her

I told her I wanted to die alone

She then said that would never happen

Which was at the time I did not know it

But she was telling the truth

Becasue ever since that day

We never left eachothers side
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Death, Love By the River

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 12:37:45 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I went to the river once

I wanted to drown my self

Where some many others have

But with my luck someone

Had gotten there before me

I had to pull her body out

Her body was cold but

She was still alive

she must have been only

For a short while

So I rescued her you can say

Her dark black hair

Covered her face So I

Moved it aside

She was very beautiful

Unnaturally fair

Almost like a doll

She would not wake up

So I just held her

So that my body would warm her

She finally opened her eyes

Then spoke and I was overwhelmed

Was there some one who wanted to die

More than I

She asked why I save her

I told her I wanted to die alone

She then said that would never happen

Which was at the time I did not know it

But she was telling the truth

Becasue ever since that day

We never left eachothers side

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-07-25 00:37:45]
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Re: Death, Love By the River (User Rating: 1 )
by Shattered_soul on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 01:35:50 AM AEST
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Your poem is very strangly written, and this is the first ive read of yours, i too have not been on in a while a wrote one after a while, i liked your ending segment though
" She asked why I save her

I told her I wanted to die alone

She then said that would never happen

Which was at the time I did not know it

But she was telling the truth

Becasue ever since that day

We never left eachothers side"
Keep up the poems
S.S

Re: Death, Love By the River (User Rating: 1 )
by paul_x_walker on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 01:38:07 AM AEST
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nice

Re: Death, Love By the River (User Rating: 1 )
by Xsitm on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:21:18 AM AEST
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very nice

Re: Death, Love By the River (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 05:30:33 PM AEST
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Touching write as always best of luck to you both . . .

Ben

Re: Death, Love By the River (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 10:24:26 PM AEST
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I had to laugh .."with my luck someone had gotten there before me" ... sounds like my luck! nice write Dorien .. I got great pics in my mind.

Re: Death, Love By the River (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:39:21 AM AEST
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Oh man I love this poem!! It's so good

Re: Death, Love By the River (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 03:39:25 AM AEST
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This one is a living fairy tale.
What river would that be if ya don't mind saying?
A masterpeice.
huggs,
emy
Thanks so much for sharing this.

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