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Array ( [sid] => 102001 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Downcast Stand [time] => 2005-07-24 21:38:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Let me blend in to apparitions not seen by hate
let me slip into your soul not to corrupt
but to peer in side

I will fall into the deepness
I refuse to be dragged down too far
I will find your reasons for your hatred
and not give into mine..

not yet
I refuse

you will never see it coming
your new power of mine
led away from the hate
no longer astray
but lost

I have taken your soul
and I will bind it to mine
you will feel my hurt and my pain

you'll be trapped in my webs of sorrow
can you feel my pain I hope you do
you will not forget
I will not let you

not yet
I refuse

I will slowly let you break
free you from my hate, and yours
and watch you cower in fear
but it's not finished

Not yet

and you will never hurt me again

I refuse

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Vampire_Slander [notes] => (Edited by Mod_11 as requested) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The Downcast Stand

Contributed by Vampire_Slander on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 09:38:28 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Let me blend in to apparitions not seen by hate
let me slip into your soul not to corrupt
but to peer in side

I will fall into the deepness
I refuse to be dragged down too far
I will find your reasons for your hatred
and not give into mine..

not yet
I refuse

you will never see it coming
your new power of mine
led away from the hate
no longer astray
but lost

I have taken your soul
and I will bind it to mine
you will feel my hurt and my pain

you'll be trapped in my webs of sorrow
can you feel my pain I hope you do
you will not forget
I will not let you

not yet
I refuse

I will slowly let you break
free you from my hate, and yours
and watch you cower in fear
but it's not finished

Not yet

and you will never hurt me again

I refuse

Copyright © Vampire_Slander ... [ 2005-07-24 21:38:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Downcast Stand (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 08:20:21 PM AEST
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stay strong
good write
-->Rae

Re: The Downcast Stand (User Rating: 1 )
by Azehr on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:18:52 PM AEST
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stubborn and strong, good write. ~Azehr~

Re: The Downcast Stand (User Rating: 1 )
by no_1nos_me on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:23:46 PM AEST
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a strong will is what keeps us going

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