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Array ( [sid] => 102000 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Friends and Lovers [time] => 2005-07-24 21:15:19 [hometext] => this happen last night [bodytext] => What are you doing to me
I have this strange feeling inside
that over comes all reason and thought
You give me that look and I just melt inside
But I can't have you, you're taken by a freind

You drove me home last night after work
we talked for hours
I told you things that your girlfriend did
because we are friends
She tells me everything about you and her
she warns me that you're not very good in bed
but I think she is just jealous
I don't know why

Ohh god why did you kiss me so passionately
What do you want
This feels wrong but also so right
I didn't ask for this
But I was always hoping

You ask me how I felt about you
I hesitate and try to avoid it
but you persist
now you want to continue
this romantic relationship

What about your girlfriend/my friend
what will happen to that
Are you just using me
since she cheats on you
all the time
I know she isn't talking to me these days
but she's still my friend and so are you
but I promise you I wouldn't tell

What to do, what to do
I seem to be in a bind
there's no turning back
because you and I made plans
to hang out at night after work
so what do I do, please tell me true
should I go forward or back?
I do not know
Oh why is this happening to me?


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Friends and Lovers

Contributed by StoneAngel on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 09:15:19 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



What are you doing to me
I have this strange feeling inside
that over comes all reason and thought
You give me that look and I just melt inside
But I can't have you, you're taken by a freind

You drove me home last night after work
we talked for hours
I told you things that your girlfriend did
because we are friends
She tells me everything about you and her
she warns me that you're not very good in bed
but I think she is just jealous
I don't know why

Ohh god why did you kiss me so passionately
What do you want
This feels wrong but also so right
I didn't ask for this
But I was always hoping

You ask me how I felt about you
I hesitate and try to avoid it
but you persist
now you want to continue
this romantic relationship

What about your girlfriend/my friend
what will happen to that
Are you just using me
since she cheats on you
all the time
I know she isn't talking to me these days
but she's still my friend and so are you
but I promise you I wouldn't tell

What to do, what to do
I seem to be in a bind
there's no turning back
because you and I made plans
to hang out at night after work
so what do I do, please tell me true
should I go forward or back?
I do not know
Oh why is this happening to me?






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Re: Friends and Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by thepizzaguy on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 09:59:47 PM AEST
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I liked this poem partly because this is what I've been going through with one of my female friends. I want something more than just friendship, but I'm afraid it will destroy the friendship we already have. If you would like, I wrote a poem about my situation, its called "St. Thomas More's Church Bells," please feel free to read and comment on it if you like. Thank you and that's a great poem.


Re: Friends and Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by Tricky on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 10:33:38 PM AEST
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You should try a spell checker, but other then that, I loved it. It's truly a great poem, and quoting my friend, since its honest, it makes it truly great.


Re: Friends and Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 02:08:09 PM AEST
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Step back Laina... you're only gonna get hurt!




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