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Array ( [sid] => 101993 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => finally dieing [time] => 2005-07-24 16:22:52 [hometext] => i just wanted to die the day i wrote this.... [bodytext] => The pain is severe
The cuts are deep
The blood is pouring
Forming a pool at my feet

Soon i'll be in hell
For God doesnt take freaks
My flesh will burn
Thrown away to dogs like meat

You can claim all you want
That you don't know why
That you didn't know i was sad
But your the reason i want to die

Now I hold the knife
The last time i ever will
I cant wait to die
Up my spine crawls chills

In deep it goes
Right through my chest
Dead finally i am
But in hell we'll meet again [comments] => 5 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 72 [informant] => CrippinBabi513 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

finally dieing

Contributed by CrippinBabi513 on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 04:22:52 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

The pain is severe
The cuts are deep
The blood is pouring
Forming a pool at my feet

Soon i'll be in hell
For God doesnt take freaks
My flesh will burn
Thrown away to dogs like meat

You can claim all you want
That you don't know why
That you didn't know i was sad
But your the reason i want to die

Now I hold the knife
The last time i ever will
I cant wait to die
Up my spine crawls chills

In deep it goes
Right through my chest
Dead finally i am
But in hell we'll meet again

Copyright © CrippinBabi513 ... [ 2005-07-24 16:22:52]
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Re: finally dieing (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 05:19:27 PM AEST
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And what happened after that?

... You left me suspended.
waiting to hear what happened next...

Re: finally dieing (User Rating: 1 )
by Kayden on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 05:19:46 PM AEST
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OOOOOOOOOO WOW!!! This gave me goose bumps. Man this is an awsome poem. You defenitly put thought into this one. But dont think about killing yourself, give it to God and he will Help you through. He doesnt think that you are a freak for He is the one that made you in his Image. remember that and give your problems to God.

Re: finally dieing (User Rating: 1 )
by StoneAngel on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:24:20 PM AEST
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wow such a sad poem. Ive thought of killing myself at one time or another. hang in there it will be ok.

Re: finally dieing (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 10:45:31 PM AEST
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awww.... it's so sad! great write, but i really hope that you don't hurt yourself. i know the knife, gun, rope, all of that is tempting.... but i really hope that you don't kill yourself. not even hurt yourself! i hope that this 'day' you are talking about is over and you don't feel like this anymore. good write though, keep up the good work!

~sprints

Re: finally dieing (User Rating: 1 )
by Sad-one on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:04:24 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this poem and the emotion that was expressed in it. It`s a great write and you should really keep writing.I`d have to disagree though about a statement that you make in the poem. God takes anyone and everyone, if i can be saved from all the ***** ive done, you can too. i dont mean to preach but i just had to say that. i wont tell u everything will be ok because i dont know your situation but fell free to PM me anytime.

Warm Love,
Sadone

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