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Array ( [sid] => 10198 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Every Day Life [time] => 2003-01-11 20:00:00 [hometext] => This is a poem I am supposed to write for school... Please let me know how it is (I wrote this when i was mad) It might not be emotional..not supposed to be but let me know how it is. [bodytext] => As I sit in my room all alone
And listen to my parents moan and groan
About something in this world that’s a hard task
Did it all come up over a wine cast
Oh no it’s something much more
Downstairs it sounds like a world war
I listen real hard and hear my name
I feel this world is just getting lame
But there’s still something that keeps me sane
She keeps my life like a flowing water main
Thinking about all of this makes me sad
Knowing all of the good times I could have had
I need to stay here for a little bit longer
For my feelings will only get stronger
I guess I should put these feelings to rest
But if anything happens remember I only guessed [comments] => 1 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Cued4 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Every Day Life

Contributed by Cued4 on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As I sit in my room all alone
And listen to my parents moan and groan
About something in this world that’s a hard task
Did it all come up over a wine cast
Oh no it’s something much more
Downstairs it sounds like a world war
I listen real hard and hear my name
I feel this world is just getting lame
But there’s still something that keeps me sane
She keeps my life like a flowing water main
Thinking about all of this makes me sad
Knowing all of the good times I could have had
I need to stay here for a little bit longer
For my feelings will only get stronger
I guess I should put these feelings to rest
But if anything happens remember I only guessed

Copyright Â© Cued4 ... [ 2003-01-11 20:00:00]
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Re: Every Day Life (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 03:37:53 PM AEST
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This is interesting i had a hard time trying to get what u were writing about however. I liked it however.

Bobo (Joel)

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