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watch the thoughts inside me

Contributed by suicidal_imbecile on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:42:14 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry



Here I lay about to realease pain the only way I know how
Watch me now
Watch me open up the razor, take the blades out
Do you know
what this is about?
I don't, all I feel is pain.
By cutting what is there to gain?
Pressure released upon my heart
This is where my lifes about to start.
Tonight I will have one good night sleep.
I hope I cut too deep.
Wont wake up at all
Watch, watch my lifes about to fall,
first drops of blood,
it feels so good.
dripping down my skin.
In the end the devil will always win
Open it up more
My heart is much too sore....

-Kate Ecklund-




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Re: watch the thoughts inside me (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 02:56:43 AM AEST
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Thank you for sharing I have often wondered why some make themselves bleed .I suppose they feel like the pain and uncertainty is in the blood. In the old days the docters let blood with the notion that it would be replaced by new and the sickness released. Its a emotional write and sad.

Whisper


Re: watch the thoughts inside me (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:35:49 AM AEST
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Well Kate this is a sad write and I’m sorry life is still such a struggle for you. Life can be hard and dark and really hurt but I pray you never do this to your self. It was a good write though, very well written. A great release for pain and emotion. Keep up the writes and keep your head up my friend….Steve


Re: watch the thoughts inside me (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 07:06:37 AM AEST
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i know the feeling of release through blood and your write expresses it truthfully




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