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[aid] => mick
[title] => Betrayal
[time] => 2005-07-23 22:52:48
[hometext] => Um...yeah...i'm not good at sharing my emotions with people...or letting people in...i sorta keep all my pain to myself!
[bodytext] => Why did you betray me
And put me through all this pain
While my tears were pouring out
Like the falling rain
All my pain inside
You will never know
Because there’s only one place
It’ll show
But I’ll lock all my pain up
And I’ll never let it out
But one day all of my years pain I’ve locked up will explode
And I know this without a doubt
For years and years I’ve locked it up
Never letting anyone see what’s inside
And when I need to be alone
I just runaway and hide
I never let anyone see me cry
Even when I really need them to
‘Cause I don’t want anyone to pity me
Even when I do
You’re the only one
I gave a glimpse of my pain
But you turned on me
And left me out in the rain
I should’ve known better
But I thought It was right
Now look where it’s got me
I’m sleeping alone tonight
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 193
[topic] => 48
[informant] => Misunderstood_gurl
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[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
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Betrayal
Contributed by
Misunderstood_gurl
on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:52:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why did you betray me
And put me through all this pain
While my tears were pouring out
Like the falling rain
All my pain inside
You will never know
Because there’s only one place
It’ll show
But I’ll lock all my pain up
And I’ll never let it out
But one day all of my years pain I’ve locked up will explode
And I know this without a doubt
For years and years I’ve locked it up
Never letting anyone see what’s inside
And when I need to be alone
I just runaway and hide
I never let anyone see me cry
Even when I really need them to
‘Cause I don’t want anyone to pity me
Even when I do
You’re the only one
I gave a glimpse of my pain
But you turned on me
And left me out in the rain
I should’ve known better
But I thought It was right
Now look where it’s got me
I’m sleeping alone tonight
Copyright ©
Misunderstood_gurl
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2005-07-23 22:52:48]
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Re: Betrayal
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:03:45 PM AEST
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wow, yes we are quite similar. this feels like you explained me- again. it was a great write and i understand. i lock away my feelings, let one person in and he betrayed me. it hurts, but we have to be strong. so let's be strong together! good write, keep up the good work!
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Re: Betrayal
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:17:01 PM AEST
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| yes...lets be strong together. and we shall make it through. Thanks for the comment! |
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Re: Betrayal
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by emystar on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:18:35 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written. I can certainly relate.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Betrayal
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:21:59 PM AEST
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| thank you...im starting to see that im not alone in the world...anymore. |
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Re: Betrayal
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by Kayden on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:23:49 PM AEST
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WOW, Good Job, thats an awesome wright... Now im sad. Sad as it is i think a lot of people lock up there pain and not let it out for anyone to see. But you should give it to God and he will help you Though and time and time again.
-Jimmy |
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Re: Betrayal
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by PuppetEcho on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:25:40 PM AEST
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| I've been kinda feeling like this myself recently. |
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Re: Betrayal
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:33:58 PM AEST
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| thank you...again everyone for commenting. and i'm glad you liked it. and i know...God will help me through anything...but i have good news. I was just saved in April. ^ ^ |
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Re: Betrayal
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by veenu on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 02:16:13 AM AEST
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| in few words,,,,,,,,,,its a masterpiece |
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Re: Betrayal
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by cooley1818 on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:19:12 AM AEST
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| excellant write, im another who knows where your commin from, to share your pain with one special person and get stabbed in the back, its painful and eventually you'll make it through,good job |
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Re: Betrayal
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:19:52 AM AEST
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This was just one sad poem, your emotions have been penned so well.
Thank you for sharing it.
Jane~ |
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Re: Betrayal
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by PuppyChow on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 03:35:01 PM AEST
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| ditto what sprints said. this explains alot of people for sure, including me. nice job really liked it. keep it up. |
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Re: Betrayal
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by needs_change on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:07:23 PM AEST
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| wow. hit me on the head babe. great write. you ***** nailed it. |
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