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Array ( [sid] => 101918 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => renegade part II [time] => 2005-07-22 20:56:19 [hometext] => this is a remake to a rap by Jay-z AND eminem [bodytext] => motha ***
say that im foolish i dont listen to rules
got no edgucation so **** school
how u gonna judge sumthin u cant relate to
ill help u see ur way to ...
anotha side of the teen age mind wen its time to unwind
seein ya motha ya brotha n ya sista cryin
cuz u came home high n fell down the stairs but who cares ..
i only got a few who are tru so wat u gotta do is love the ones close to u
n keep ya enemies as close ..
dun mess wit trics n stay away from hoes
u neva kno who could deliver the fatal blow ..
its the lords desision wen its ur time to go
but my intention is to make money n then make some more
live off the rage of the people my age ..
the whole inspiration to fillin the page ..
that and the fact that i almost lost to a 12 guage [comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 34 [informant] => systematiq [notes] => Edited due to the use of a banned word. Please do not try to cheat the world filters. Read the rules and stick to them. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

renegade part II

Contributed by systematiq on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 08:56:19 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

motha ***
say that im foolish i dont listen to rules
got no edgucation so **** school
how u gonna judge sumthin u cant relate to
ill help u see ur way to ...
anotha side of the teen age mind wen its time to unwind
seein ya motha ya brotha n ya sista cryin
cuz u came home high n fell down the stairs but who cares ..
i only got a few who are tru so wat u gotta do is love the ones close to u
n keep ya enemies as close ..
dun mess wit trics n stay away from hoes
u neva kno who could deliver the fatal blow ..
its the lords desision wen its ur time to go
but my intention is to make money n then make some more
live off the rage of the people my age ..
the whole inspiration to fillin the page ..
that and the fact that i almost lost to a 12 guage

Copyright © systematiq ... [ 2005-07-22 20:56:19]
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Re: renegade part II (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:09:09 PM AEST
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I really am liking your writing pieces.. they are very educating..

All my kids are grown up.. so I get lost with what is happening around me..

Oh I can see it on the streets.. but no young kids come home to me anymore to say... well mom, this is what it is, there doing.. da da da.. etc. etc..

My grandkids are young and far away, so.. I really am not around kids all that much..

Well, your poems sure say a lot.. I like your style.. ty..

Raquel Leah (Poetress)

Re: renegade part II (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:05:05 PM AEST
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I know what you mean but that does not mean you have to be a gangster! (that's my word for renegade). City life is hard and you have to be prepared to save what is yours- the question is are you a part of the solution or a part of the problem? When i read the first 4 lines of your poem it tells me that you have to think about what you want to do a little more before you get yourself killed or lose those close to you by some fatal mistake. I guess I should read part 1 too huh? 3 stars for this one

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