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Array ( [sid] => 10191 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ''''''''''One more time''''''''''''''''' [time] => 2003-01-11 18:00:00 [hometext] => family needs to get along,,one day they won't be there,, [bodytext] => A person helps their family out,,
thet best way that he can,,,
what does he get in return ?,,,
Nothing,,,your A liar,,,
One trys to help them,,
plus himself,,
It's hard on him,,
what does his family expect,,
he's doing the best he can,,

why doesn't he just give his all to them,,,
and just give up,,quit,,
he won't it's not his nature,,
but this is how he feels at times,,,

He feels sad ,,
because he is trying to help his family out,,
and all they want to do is dog him,,
he's not good enough,,
well I am sorry,,
I can't give my 100% to them,,

I do the best ,,
that I can do,,thats all that I can do,,
They keep it up ,,putting him down,,
and they will never see him again,,

all he wants is to be,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
he can't even say it ,,,
doesn't know why he ask's for it,,
there more Important,,
than he is,,,,but stii he won't give up,,
he'll just leave like before,,,
what one more time,,to leave again,,,


craig s. meeks

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 270 [topic] => 6 [informant] => spooky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
''''''''''One more time'''''''''''''''''

Contributed by spooky on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



A person helps their family out,,
thet best way that he can,,,
what does he get in return ?,,,
Nothing,,,your A liar,,,
One trys to help them,,
plus himself,,
It's hard on him,,
what does his family expect,,
he's doing the best he can,,

why doesn't he just give his all to them,,,
and just give up,,quit,,
he won't it's not his nature,,
but this is how he feels at times,,,

He feels sad ,,
because he is trying to help his family out,,
and all they want to do is dog him,,
he's not good enough,,
well I am sorry,,
I can't give my 100% to them,,

I do the best ,,
that I can do,,thats all that I can do,,
They keep it up ,,putting him down,,
and they will never see him again,,

all he wants is to be,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
he can't even say it ,,,
doesn't know why he ask's for it,,
there more Important,,
than he is,,,,but stii he won't give up,,
he'll just leave like before,,,
what one more time,,to leave again,,,


craig s. meeks





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Re: ''''''''''One more time''''''''''''''''' (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 06:04:30 PM AEST
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Sorry you feel that way Craig, just keep your feet moving, you must go on


Re: ''''''''''One more time''''''''''''''''' (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 09:33:45 PM AEST
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And they will never understand that you are giving your all and trying your very best....what people who cannot see such beauty in your heart and soul as i can is beyond my imagination of thoughts...this one has captivated me in so many ways.....keep writing forever my friend ......as you already know how it makes me feel....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: ''''''''''One more time''''''''''''''''' (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 09:42:24 PM AEST
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Wishing You much love, beauty and smiles and do hope your feeling happier soon my friend:)
always Nessa
huggs*


Re: ''''''''''One more time''''''''''''''''' (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 09:27:22 AM AEST
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Craig,when I read this I felt like you wrote it for me! Boy this really hit home! Thanks for posting this one it helped! Christina


Re: ''''''''''One more time''''''''''''''''' (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 06:28:19 PM AEST
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I like this. I don't know if it's a story but it's nice




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